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MagicalEntaty


i love reading and writing and just being myself things that is sometime sparest but who cares right.

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Mountain top kingdoms is all anybody really knows, though they were told of a time where the land was once whole, where the hell called the wasteland was not the most dangerous place on the face of the planet, but amazing lands. And it's true 1000 years ago it was known as Canterlot, seemingly endless land, peace and harmony, but then corruption wiggled in and the world fell in to this.

The young orphan, Twilight Storm and her friends man the air ship called the "Elemental" that belonged to the Storm Hawks before them. This is there story how they came together as friends to fight Master Cycloneus, and her army, lead by Dark Ace, Twilight's brother, and any other trouble that brewed. This is how the united The Cosmos.

Storm Hawks crossover.

wings but instead of horns it's runes around the wrist.

Rainbow Dash, and Applejack are boy's.

Canterlot is Equeatria, but being human Equestria dose not work

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Dude, I loved Storm Hawks from begining to end. If you plan on using that show as a base, do yourself a favor and find a Beta reader because frankly...this story is full of grammer errors, misspelled words, and auto correct mistakes. As it stands, this story dosen't live up to the standards established for both MLP and Storm Hawks. I'm willing to lend a hoof in the editing process, if you're interested PM me and we can work out a schedule.

5799372 I know I know. I've been trying to find someone for that for all of my story's, and your not the first to point it out.

I would like to see more.

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