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Striving Scholar


Hello everyone, I enjoy reading fanfiction, games, and writing among other hobbies. I also enjoy meeting new people and trying to write fanfiction as well.

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Rough Cut met Maud Pie during their studies in college. After a ‘rocky’ start, they became friends and have remained close ever since. While he enjoys her company, there has always been a small trait of hers that he enjoyed seeing: her smile. He knows that it is rare, but he wants to see it as well as be someone who can make her smile...and an opportunity arises during her next visit to Ponyville.

Cover Art by: kuren247

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

Always glad to see a Maud fic, as they're in short supply. I like this one so far, and will definitely be following it. :raritywink:

There's a small continuity error during the earlier part of the chapter. At one point you have it saying that he had finished his lunch early and that was why he had attempted to get to know Maud. Then later you have it say he's still eating his lunch.


Other than that, it's a pretty good story so far and i'll be curious to see how it progresses.

7013299 Oh I see, I completely missed that one. Thank you for pointing it out and it's fixed now.

Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it so far :pinkiesmile:

Tiger Eye, is a Rough and tumble Earth Pony miner from Fillydelphia.

rough I think , unless you the pony which I doubt.

8125573 Wow, I must have been so used to capitalizing Rough that I missed it, thanks for that :twilightsheepish: Ok it's fixed now.

Rough Cut froze in place and his heart beat faster as he looked at her. she looked very nice in the sunlight reflecting off her eyes and a genuine smile gracing her lips. it was a smile that was rare to see on her face; in the several years he had known her, this was a rare treat...and one he would never tire of seeing if he could.

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