Pinkie Pie travels through the mirror portal (from EG)
...But she doesn't return alone!
A story of forgiveness and the power of little acts of kindness.
Image by Sketchywolf-13 @ DeviantArt.com
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Atreyu
Jesus said to them: "Healthy people don't need a doctor; sick people do. I have come not for those who think they are righteous, but for those who know they are sinners and need to repent." ~Luke 5:32
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Not half bad, it does seem to be progressing a bit quickly though, and not putting his truck in there is a bit of a letdown, I think that this deserves a fav.
Well this story seems interesting, I have to say that for sure.
I agree with what TLW down below said, it seems to be progressing a tad quickly, and his truck not being there kinda bums me out.
But other then that, this story is shaping up to be a very good read.
Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of it soon should you update ^^
Dustchu out~
Yay! more to this story!
Booyah! this is looking great, a nice new chapter well done man!
This is exciting, I don't even know why but I love this!
Sweettooth, a Cold hearted killer of hundreds, and Fluttershy, the Pegesus who sees the good in people.
I just love how she's taking this, its awesome!
Keep it up man!
Legit, I hope to see more soon!
I think you should continue, unless you intend to end it in the next chapter or two, the ending isn't that imminently important; after all, there are so many possible adventures for Sweet Tooth to go on. In fact that could help fix overly rapid story progression.
I like it.
The flow of this chapter is much better, now you are getting the hang of it, good job. Also, thank you for continuing the story.
I was expecting Applejack to be the Xenophobe, as usual, while Twilight was the Skeptic, again as usual.
Interesting,I wonder what would happen if Discord were to poor himself into this equation.
Whoo! another chapter, nice work man.
Loving the interaction between Sweettooth and Pinkie.
The flow of the chapter is better, but there'salways room for improvement! :D
Keep it up man.
Hmm, interesting~
I like how this is progressing.
Rarity seems to be reacting right, hehe.
Twilight too, in a way.
Keep it up!
Thanks for all your support guys ^.^ It really has made a difference. Glad people are enjoying the story.
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No problem dude! :D Tis a good story!
This chapter was intense! in a way.
Good work!
Another epic chapter well done, nice work!
Seems Sweetooth is slowly but surely seeing what they're getting at.
Awesomeness.
Was that a shed reference?
Well done, though it saddens me to think that there is only one more chapter.
This made me laugh so dang hard XD hahahaha XD
Nicely done!
Another well done chapter, nicely done yet again! :D
Can't wait to see the next!
5587516 In the same way I can't wait to finish it :D
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Epicness! :D
Whoa... Sweettooth having a change of heart... never thought I'd see the day.
Man this is deep, like... legit.
Nicely done man.
VERY well done for a first time writer; the plot was interesting and fairly well written, the characters developed decently, and the ending was quite good. If I could give it more likes, I would, and I think you have earned yourself a follower.
Short chapter, but nice 8D
Oh wow, that ending was pretty... tame, I loved it!
This was a very good story, nicely written and well done. Marcus Kane, back to his old self.
I like it, nicely done man! and from below, first time writing? Well done! //claps very well done.
Keep it up man!
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5593611 Thank-you, wholeheartedly! Your continued support has made all the difference. Thank you both so much =)
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You're very welcome man! This story was epic! I thought it died like most I've seen ;w;
but luckily it didn't! :D and I'm glad to have stuck with it till the end!
Keep up the awesome work man!
*flips a table and knocks a TV over* DAMMIT! *throws books out a window* I owe him 20 bucks now!
I have but one thing to say.
5628660 I'll take that as a compliment
you know what you need to do? make a one shot story of sweet tooth killing everyone in ponyvile
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What order should he do it?