Wait a minute. Is this another story were humans going to Equestria can't speak for some unexplained reason? And are forced to stay there, completely leaving their friends, family, and everything they had going for them back on Earth behind? Somehow falling in love with a pony? Probably a main cast member?

I don't know how else to tell you this, but that's been very over done. The market has essentially become oversaturated. You really need to change things up and provide us with something creative and new in order for this to work.

5563996 Don't worry, I agree with you that this is a completely dry and brittle story method, but it's what I'm using as a mold to get into the swing of things on this website. I will make things 'different' for your guys' sake, and keep things interesting. No way I'm going to make this story redundant to the others, that'll just look bad on my part.

As I said, this is just a mold, and I would like to cement it into a base for something good for y'all. With your guys' opinions and such, I can make that happen. Thanks for briging this up, Grey.

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I sure hope so. I really hope this is something creative and new to look forward to.