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QueenMoriarty


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Huh. The characterization felt a bit off, but I could have more easily forgiven that if this didn't just feel like an almost-sequel to the original Cupcakes.

5604440 Well, yeah. That's kind of what it is. Just an attempt to come at a classic story from a different angle.

This story sucks enormous balls and nobody should read it. If you're here, you're here by mistake.

Don't waste any more time. PLEASE, turn back now and spend your time reading something good, or at least well-written.

Oh! I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to just walk it, I noticed there was a story here but I didn't mean to see this much! Please excuse me while I try to forget this scene and act like this didn't happen.

There were some ponies that needed a good, hard talking to.

as long as "good, hard talking to" is code for "straight-jacket" or "bullet-to-the-head" then yeah Fluttershy, go for it.

You are truly a talent of variety KingMoriarty.

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No, bad comment. Go back to comment hell for thine blasphemy.

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No. Don't wanna. I speak the truth.

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BLASPHEMY! I REPEAT, BLASPHEMY!!

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BUT IT'S JUST SO BAAAAD!

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I DOWNVOTE THAT COMMENT BECAUSE OF HOW WRONG IT IS

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But I've just improved so much since writing it, and it's so hackneyed and unoriginal!

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Out of curiosity, do you have a rewritten version of this?

Aslo I haven't yet read your other works so I don't have anything to compare it to

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I have not tried to rewrite this, no. It's a fairly nothing story that's a quasi-sequel to a fandom joke so old there are probably people in the fandom who don't know about it.

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Okay it's 12:20 am. I should probably go to bed.

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