Loves to write, and will likely publish a novel soon(ish). Also love to game, read comics, and generally, being a geek.
Rainbow Dash longed for adventure, something worthy of one of Daring Do's adventures. But when she wakes up in a strange place, in a strange body, will it turn out to be a curse or a blessing? She will soon find out that she is not as alone as she thinks.
Crossover with Naruto. One of several stories involving Naruto paired with a human pony.
A Naruto/Dash pairing.
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I can't tell much from a single chapter, but I like what I've read thus far. Technically it's a good piece of work; well written and no mistakes jumped out at me.
Hmmm interesting. Will Sunset be included in the series of stories? Cause I see Naruto in Equestria Girls universe, post the events of the first movie and approaching her.
5542492 That's actually a good idea, but the series of stories I'm planning will likely be alternative versions of Spectrum. Like, what would happen if Rarity appeared instead of Dash, etc. Doing a Naruto/Sunset one is planned as well, but I do want to avoid similarities to the story Daybreak. Naruto in the EG Universe is a good idea if I can think of an actual plot for it.
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You could have Naruto, after living out his life as a ninja and Hokage, his spirit and chakra are so strong and travels through different dimensions and realities, remembering his past life and etc. He is reborn in the EG universe and goes to Canterlot High after feeling the magical disturbance.
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That's an interesting idea. What I kinda want to do is have Sunset and Naruto end up in a completely different world, and must let go of their differences and work together.
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That sounds good too, plus what I've suggested has been over used a lot though in crossover fanfiction. He is either an immortal dimensional walker or is reborn over and over.
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Heh, too true. I'm guilty of that in more than five stories I have on FFN,
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Although I prefer those over Naruto leaving Konoha, being banished or betrayed, along with character bashing. To be honest I like the idea of an 'enlighten' Naruto reaching out to someone like Sunset.
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I feel the same. Can't stand bashing. I prefer Naruto being himself, and that being the reason he is sent to another world. Immortality is something I use only when the story itself calls for it. And if I can get my mind to focus, I have some surprises in store for the next chapters of Apples & Cinnamon and Spectrum.
There is much potential in this. I'm curious how will you go about bringing it to the surface.
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I'm hoping I'll be able to bring it out, but right now, there is many conflicting ideas, which is why I'm late with the second chapter.
5570928 Trust me, you are not alone on that front.
I need to get back to work on my own story, but I've been compelled to start on the EG sequel to my series, and I've decided to drop one planned story in favor of another that came to me the other day that seems much more interesting.
Blarg.
Not sure yet what to make of this story but it looks promising.
I like it so far. and I hope you do put it on ff
Any chance of you continuing this?
6193524 Yep, totally do. I planned a pretty good bit of it. But things came up, and torn me away from the next chapter.
Whoa! Totally awesome story ya got here so far! Please update it soon! I look forward to how it'll turn out!
So when you plan to chapter?
nice work let me know when the next part is out
LOLZ!!! Looks like Rainbow found out about us humans eating meat. Poor Dashy. Hope she'll be alright! Anyway, seems she also likes ramen. As long as it's vegetable though. Lol.
I also liked how you write this in Ino's perspective. I've always liked her. I hope to see another update soon too!
Finally, if this goes on FFN, could ya let me know when it's up there? I'd love to review it there as well!
Keep this up and see ya next update!
6827216 Posted the first chapter to FFN. Gonna wait a tad before I post chapter 2 though.
6827260 Sounds good!
nice work
Two things I wanted to point out. The first, instead of geology, I think you meant geography. Geology is the study of rocks. Also, I'm not so sure Rainbow Dash would be so freaked out that she fainted about finding out someone eats meat. One of her friends growing up was a Gryphon and its often assumed they eat at least fish. Her other friend, Fluttershy, is also friends with carnivores.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
6831554 While that is true, it IS Dash, so she would likely get Geology and Geography confused, etc. I had her faint because she heard the word Pork. If it was fish, she would likely be okay with it.
Either something's missing between these two, or you need to get rid of one of them. Otherwise, I look forwards to the next chapter!
6838352 Good catch. As I mentioned before, that scene went through 10 different versions. Guess I left some remnants. Gonna add a few stuff to the opening Dash scene anyway, so, guess I'll fix that one too in a minute.
This story is good. Would like a chapter a month instead of one a year but quality is more important to me.