Every pony has a story. The same goes for cities.
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May include places where holes in canon are filled in.
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UnicodingUnicorn
Something about myself huh? Well, I'm but a Student of the Queen of the Sciences and Her Subjects, average in many but exceptional in none. Also, I'm pretty good at sounding mysterious. I think.
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Wow... This was beautifully written! I dare say, you have a gift! This is a magnificent story and I hope there is more to come
1st.
Do more please
2nd.
Part of the story about The Castle of the Two Sisters is awesome.
I think it's the most logical explanation I've ever seen.
3d.
I would sugest to use capital letters here:
~elkophys
5532627 Thanks for the feedback! I've made the changes you have suggested.
5532590 Thanks!
Great story and I agree with Undead Parchment 0900,
Keep writing!!! (Imagine me giving you a thumbs up)
1st part...
...where I say that this chapter is great.
2nd part...
...where I ask about stuff:
a)
I thought the first time was when ponies invented candles...
Yes, candles are fire-dangerous and electicity offers more powerful light sourcers, but still...
b)
Why you didn't mention Manehatten University?
I often see mention of MSU (Manehatten State University) in stories. The whole thing is inspired by Uni Days, i think.
c)
About inspirations and universities.
I suggest Trottingham for next chapter. Mostly because of this
3d part...
...where I found stuff.
This crap causes a new line to start with a dot.
Another brilliant chapter for a wonderful story! Do keep up the excellent work
And I agree with Elkophys; I suggest Trottingham next as well.
Also, I advise you add your fic to a few groups, get more views and possibly more likes and favorites. Just a thought.
5549875 I'm afraid that I have no idea how groups work here or if there any appropriate groups to add this fic to.
5548983 Artistic license. To be honest, I kind of forgot about the University. And thanks for spotting the mistake.
5543454 Thank you.
Apologies, I was halfway through this chapter before I read the comments.
Hmmm...
Not so much about Cloudsdale itself but about the whole Tribe of the Sky.
Good chapter anyway.
And no, it doesn't count as a dark fic, I think.
And you should definetly add this fic to some groups or find another way to spread it.
First published week ago and still has only 3 likes.
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Cloudsdale. Home of the pegasi. 'Tis a magnificent place, built in the sky, made of clouds. I love this fic. It fits in perfectly with the canon of the show. I applaud you, good sir or madam
Taking suggestions for next city. Also, I'm really tempted to do the next chapter in Chinese for thematic effect, but I doubt that's allowed, right?
Don't know much about "chinese styled" cities of Equestria.
And "chinatowns" would best fit in Fillydelphia. Because I imagine this city as big multicultural megapolis.
Also, are there any official name for the capital of the Crystal Empire? Because I can't find any.
5561292 I do believe that the Crystal Empire is just one big city in the middle of a frozen wasteland, and that the name Crystal Empire reflects that city.