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Primus
Yes, my avatar is looking OP, but it is merely a transfer character I have that seems OP, but not in the sense you are thinking. Think multiverse. And there are way stronger worlds out there.
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This is hilarious! 10/10! Keep up the great work!
Holy shit, to many vamps! Getting kinda scared, cause vamps do terrify me
i like it exept for a small problem each chapter are to long
...would help your reader-base and probably your like/dislike ratio if you split these up a little.
Seems interesting, but I'm not committing 60k worth of time on the first chapter.
hot danm why is each of your chapters longer than most fully drawn out complete fics? lol , either you don't know what pacing with relevant information is , or you have a wild imagination XD .....
DAMMIT ALIEN:::::::....::::::
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....i have this thing to read stories ther are LONG or whit big chapters
Please more
....lol
....hmmmm i wonder if celestia is a "puppeter" kind of ruler and acts like she is the good in everything and hides all bad....
dont you mean a "angry mob"
no im just saying this if ther comes sex from ashoka...COCKBLOCKER WINDU
GOOD JOB YODA
FLUTTERSHY YOUR NOT ALOWED TO USE THE FORCE
wait wait...ww2 nazi germany......god im good at refrence i know of....or mayby the fact im having about that in school right now......
5803470 Chapter one is 74k words now.
To the author; Please consider cutting up your chapters in to parts. I've read Fallout Equestria, and these make those chapters look short. They're too long for most people to even consider reading...
Yay
Am I the only one that feels that Blitz should become angry at Twilight and Fluttershy for what they did to Ahsoka? That feels so wrong, giving her no choice in the matter, then forcibly brainwashing her into their own tastes. It would be one thing for if Ahsoka gave consent, but she didn't - that's more-or-less rape, brainwashing, sexual enslavement, kidnapping (trying to force her into not going back to fight in the Clone Wars), forcing her into sexual enjoyment (kind of a brainwashed form of Stockholm Syndrome), and more - all things that the Galactic Republic have adamant laws against.
On the note of Stockholm Syndrome, am I the only one that attributes Soarin's rapid attachment to Blitz to that? Being forced into so much change, that they sling themselves onto the first thing available that makes them feel safe?
I mean, I really like the story, but I now despise Twilight and Fluttershy in this story for forcing this onto Soarin' and Ahsoka...
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Okay, Ahsoka is the one Blitz doesn't know about. Plus, with all the things she learning about the ture nature of both sides, she does have that little inkling of leaving.
As for Soarin, no change back. You heard them, Soarin might commit suicide. Not having her latch onto something is worse than lacthing onto Blitz. At least there she can learn and enjoy life as a mare now. Besides, Soarin was into stallions. Also, it was supposed to be soarin's punshiement from Spitfire. She called on Twilight to make the change. And you really haven't read the first time Fluttershy hypnotize somepony. Check back when the herd was still small.
6105167 naw, I remember that, I just feel very wrong about it for some reason. I can somewhat pass the Soarin' part, but the Ahsoka part just rustles my jimmies to the next layer of hell. If it was consenual, that would be one thing, but with her still not having said definitively yes or no, and then it being forced either way the way it was, just peeved me out. If she asked for it, then I would probably be okay, but with Twilight and Fluttershy just ripping away who she is because they thought Blitz would like having Ahsoka in the herd (that would have happened anyway, I'm fine with that part) and more-or-less brainwashing her into liking a certain style and having a certain role in the herd, instead of forming her own part and role, is the thing that gets to me. If she had a chance to settle herself in how she fit in best, I'd be a happy camper with no complaints to lodge. However, being forced in the way she was, that just screams, "aw HELL naw!" to me in so many ways.
EDIT: Plus, I stand by my belief that how they did that has to be breaking some major laws somewhere - you don't just go playing Dr. Frankenstein to someone's psychology like that non-consent ally without someone throwing a stink somewhere in the legal system of wherever-the-hell it happens in.
deleted scene from the wedding:
As the rogue Mandalorian kicked the door, he could only look on in shock as every guest pulled a weapon on him. "Well that's just not fair at all.
"I'm sorry," replied Blitz, drawing his own blaster. "We don't give a f***!"
If your going to quote Hellsing abridged, don't leave out the best ones.
On a side note, if you need someone to edit the story, give me a buzz.
shortest chapter till date... but still ohhh soooo sweet to read! and now i know how far in the "canon" story line we are!
I was wondering in a previous chapter, the one with Spike commanding the ship that leeches energy from its opponent to power it's own weapons, I was trying to figure out which stars hip Spike was using, because it sounded so familiar - then it hit me. The Keldabe-class Battleship, a product of Mandal Hypernautics and widely utilized by the Zann Consortium in Star Wars: Empire at War: Forces of Corruption. The Rebellion Tech Level 5 Black Market item, gives the Keldabe a shield-leech ability that drains opponent's shields to increase power to its own weaponry.
Spike is best Keldabe-class Captain. Giv e that butch a Battleship.
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6186342 Actually, that was a made up bullshit moment I came up with when me and co-author was writing it. I didn't know it was actually done before.
6187882 yup, it was - and the Keldabe is a Mandalorian design, produced by Mandal Hypernautics (like I already said), built entirely on Mandalore, and named after Mandalore's capital city.
She be done, but it fits damn well into the story, I must say. Keep it, it may be useful later in the story.
Here's a link, for future reference.
Spread your story out among lots of chaps your chaps are longer than a lot of full completed storys are.
these are my thoughts still a good story probably
worth all the wait
Good show. I do like how there was some retribution for the Ahsoka thing, that just doesn't seem like the kind of thing that wouldn't have any repercussions... but I think the way it was handled was wonderful. And the escalation of involvement in the war for the Blitzkrieg clan, I wonder where this will go. I'm also wondering what will happen when Sidious finally makes his move....
*Imperial March plays softly in head*
...hmmm i wonder what fanart ipof Blitz would look like...
Ahh, another good update. The time skip works well with this, too. I just can't wait for Tek or the like to somehow dig up the Executor-class Star Dreadnought, the Eclipse-class Star Dreadnought, or the Death Star Project / The Maw Research Station (which produced most of the Empire's top-secret superweapons, including being the location the first Death Star, and its two prototypes, were built at)... If the technoponies can route through the Extranet / Holonet like this story says they can, hacking into encrypted Imperial chatter between those who are in-the-know should be a piece of cake...
seems like someones been playing Fallout 4
So far a 'meh' story. 3/5 and good for those new to the site
Nice update. The Galactic Civil War is approaching, and I shall await it with eagerness.
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I like big chapters!
7632546 Congratulations. My point (to the author) was that this story has only 13-hundred views. Practically all of the rest of the stories in the 800K word count area have at least twice that. Some of them have four and five times that view count. there are a few that have +10K views. This one, 1,387 (at time of writing). That is a damn shame. I can almost guarantee that if this story's chapters were in the 10~20k range, it would have tons of views. Hell, I have a 2k view story and it was a hack-job, with an inconsistent release schedule and a 14-month hiatus before the final two chapters.
TL;DR: Author, my advice remains the same. Split your chapters and increase your view-count overnight!
..... Yay
While re-reading, I came back across the part where they met Saw Gererra for the first time, and instantly thought of the quote from the Rogue One trailers, "What will you become?"
God dammit hes already has a herd
Great chapter, though it's odd how long your chapters are, no complaints though!
What's Hebus.com?
This is odd to me, act 2, the sequel, is being updated recently, but this story, is still listed as incomplete but hasn't been updated in over 5 years? What the hell is up with that?
I literally just started reading, the simple fact that Turians are here just makes it awesome. Shame that best bro Garrus isn't gonna show up haha
This whole chapter was definitely an endeavour, never have I read a chapter this long before heh but I am loving it so far
Eeehhhh, the bit with Fluttershy liking being physically abused is getting way too fucking weird for me. That and the bestiality bit with Fleetfoot, just....... no, all of the no, and if anyone is legit into it they need to be forcibly removed from the gene pool.
And theres now rape play, so with that I'm out, that's strike 3. Shame too, really was liking this story before the weird and quite frankly fucked up shit started. Abuse, bestiality, and now rape fantasies. Fuck anyone who gets off to that shit, ESPECIALLY rape. Fucking degenerate psychopaths.......
H-holy shit... It-... It's... It's back...
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WHAT THE FU-
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bro ganna take me 3 days to read 1 chapter this is what iv been looking for
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well i was kinda right
Okay, I'm into chapter 1 part 3 and I'm just wondering if anything besides a harem story is gonna happen.
This is listed as an adventure, but not much adventure has been happening.