This is essentially a tale of how Flash Sentry became the pony we've always seen, and what kind of pony he truly is. Why and how did he become a guard? Who are his friends? What experiences did he suffer?
Side note: The Mane 6 will make small cameos and there will be some references to them from other characters, but they won't play a major part of the story. This is Flash's story, not his and Twilight's supposed story.
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With all seriousness, you're probably not going to get very far writing a Flash Sentry fic.
-someone else who write unpopular characters.
interesting. I'll keep my eye out.
Probably the second worst first story idea: writing a story about waifu stealer/canon Gary stu/Brad.
Aaand fuck, my name is the first chapter.
5504524 BEN! BEN! THEY MAGICALY RESURRECTED VADER. We need to revive you or my name isn't *Puts on sunglasses* The master commander
This seems like this is going to be a good story. I hope you continue. I know this story may not be popular, but I hope it does catch some positive review. Great job for writing a story.
Well, I don't usually like Flash, but this was well-written and I'm interested to see him getting some depth. I'll be following this! :D
Also, Twilight reading while the world comes down around her ears? Totally legit!
5504762 lol
you're using the plural as the singular, pegasi is the plural of pegasus.
this is a persistent problem throughout the chapter, minor, but still a little irritating. this part can be fixed by simply changing it to say "when pink pegasi were accepted" or "a pink pegasus was accepted"
That said I'm liking that you're building Flash Sentry a back story, it's a noble endeavor since what we've been shown of him in the series proper (or more accurately the Equestria Girls movies) has made him come out bland and falling just short of being more than a flat character.
To be honest this is pretty good for a first story attempt, I didn't see as many errors that I've seen in a lot of early and first works, mine included.
5505214 When your bored man. Shit catches your eye
As someone who likes Flash Sentry, I'm going to follow this. Best of luck with the story.
Nice story!
I wish people would stop judging Flash, though.
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Ótima historia parabéns, espero muito pelo próximo capitulo🎉