Bon Bon has longed for a human to come into her life for years. When it finally happens, she is more than happy to invite the creature into her home. However, she soon develops feelings towards the young man but will he do the same in return?
I saw one problem... "...Maybe looked down..." May be (missing space)
Still very well done chapter, VERY few put the vids IN the chapter. Usually links or words turned green that connects to said link. Idk if you DO, but that makes it seem like you care for the tablet (or smartphone....) users like me keep up the good work!!!!!
Wait a minute, ponies actually eat eggs? I mean, I do know that they put eggs in baked goods, like cake or muffins, but they will eat them like scrambled or just a cooked egg?! Weird. So much for them being herbivorous.
'cutesy relationship stuff' should be added to the 'Triggers' in the description, this chapter was so sweet I got diabetes
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Added that for you
I saw one problem...
"...Maybe looked down..."
May be (missing space)
Still very well done chapter, VERY few put the vids IN the chapter. Usually links or words turned green that connects to said link.
Idk if you DO, but that makes it seem like you care for the tablet (or smartphone....) users like me
keep up the good work!!!!!
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Thanks. My thoughts exactly on the videos. I hate links with a passion.
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We are few of a kind my friend...
So very.....very few...
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Wait a minute, ponies actually eat eggs? I mean, I do know that they put eggs in baked goods, like cake or muffins, but they will eat them like scrambled or just a cooked egg?! Weird. So much for them being herbivorous.