Bon Bon has longed for a human to come into her life for years. When it finally happens, she is more than happy to invite the creature into her home. However, she soon develops feelings towards the young man but will he do the same in return?
Question: Why did Luna yell at the guard for calling Taylor 'the human', if this was their first time meeting him? How would the guard even know the human's name?
5557591 Taylor has been around for 4 monhs, and it sounds like Luna has told that guard many times that he has a name. He's probably been talked about a lot.
I say your storyline is pretty good. Keep it up.
Also there's ONE typo I ran across talking about celestial horn gaver (gave) her (yada yada yada)
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Question: Why did Luna yell at the guard for calling Taylor 'the human', if this was their first time meeting him? How would the guard even know the human's name?
5557591 Taylor has been around for 4 monhs, and it sounds like Luna has told that guard many times that he has a name. He's probably been talked about a lot.