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Hekkar


Brony, Gamer, Roleplayer. I am also a Jackal who is skilled in Alchemy, Black Magic, Voodoo Powers, and Necromancy :3

Comments ( 16 )

The tentacles.........
God of Chaos.........
Cheese.......
I haven't read it yet, but I will take a guess:
Hermaus Mora and Sheogorath.

5477024 Half right, but not exact

5477026 Damn it......
Thought I had something there.

I like it. It's a nice start and I can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

5477094 You and whoever else likes it :)

Ok I was a little skeptical at the beginning but the rest of the chapter made up for it. Like and favored it.

Absalom and Sheogorath? That's a combination I haven't seen before and one that if you properly execute this story could become my top combo. Yes, for now this story has my eyes, let's see how long it can keep them, because these types of stories people tend to either quit extremely fast or they become boring. let's see how long you will last to keep it interesting and well keep writing the story as a whole.

Much luck!

5479771 We will need it, thanks

i wanna see where this goes

I hope we get to know more about the dreaded Day of Cheese

Why does it have so few likes? This is wonderful, if a little rushed, displaced story! Fav and like. :twilightsmile:

5649178 Perhaps the rushed feeling and the fact that it seems so... unprofessional. Maybe. I don't know, everyone's got reasons

5649178

It's because "evil human goes to equestria and screws stuff up" is SOOOOO overdone. It's no longer hip, new and edgy. Especially when the villain has NO good motivation whatsoever, nor any real reason for the audience to like them. The entire gimmick is built around wacky evil shenanigans, but that gets old, fast.

A thumbs up for my favorite effect of the staff. CHEESE!! Sometimes I even yell it in hopes it happens. :D

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