Oh, look! A fic with negative score! Well, the comments aren't that much better too! Let's read it then.
First chapter came and... you just killed Applebloom without ANY REASON AT ALL. Just dropped a bridge on her.
Nothing to add about the second. The third just makes the Applejack being more stupid.
The fourth explores better the Cutie Mark Crusaders without Applebloom, but it couldn't reach me, no kind of pity for her. Probably because of the way it's written.
Stupid Applejack in the fifth, nothing unusual.
No pity for her at the sixth too. I actually can't care about any of them in this story but then the body disappears. WHAT A TWIST?!
TL;DR: It was a completely out-of-character for basically everypony and I hope, I seriously HOPE, that you can wrap this story better than you started it.
Judging by the title and the author's name, this is most likely a story similar to the anime of the same vein. Unfortunately, trying to do something like this means you'd really have to cross some lines, like breaking character (which is already shooting yourself in the foot as it is), which is absolutely the last thing you want to do. Sorry, but I can't see this really going anywhere.
The hell did I just read?
WHERE`S THE FING BAG?
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Is that title pic by HotDiggedyDemon?
It's disgusting.
This is disgusting.
Fuck you.
YOU SIR, ARE AN IDIOT
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Thus was just...bad. A bad read altogether.
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I feel you man. That was terrible.
Learn to spell/grammar.
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Yeah, the pic's from the Ask Jappleack tumblr, which is actually a very fun blog and I recommend it.
But yeah, no to this story.
Wonderful!
I'm terrified by what the comments are suggesting... Not sure if I should read.
Oh, look! A fic with negative score! Well, the comments aren't that much better too! Let's read it then.
First chapter came and... you just killed Applebloom without ANY REASON AT ALL. Just dropped a bridge on her.
Nothing to add about the second. The third just makes the Applejack being more stupid.
The fourth explores better the Cutie Mark Crusaders without Applebloom, but it couldn't reach me, no kind of pity for her. Probably because of the way it's written.
Stupid Applejack in the fifth, nothing unusual.
No pity for her at the sixth too. I actually can't care about any of them in this story but then the body disappears. WHAT A TWIST?!
TL;DR: It was a completely out-of-character for basically everypony and I hope, I seriously HOPE, that you can wrap this story better than you started it.
That was bad...just bad
I'm not mad...just disappointed.
Judging by the title and the author's name, this is most likely a story similar to the anime of the same vein. Unfortunately, trying to do something like this means you'd really have to cross some lines, like breaking character (which is already shooting yourself in the foot as it is), which is absolutely the last thing you want to do. Sorry, but I can't see this really going anywhere.
Good job, you've pretty much botched an adaptation of one of my favorite animes. I hope you're happy.
i won't even touched a chapter because of everyone's bad opinion.