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The hell did I just read?
WHERE`S THE F
ING BAG?
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Is that title pic by HotDiggedyDemon?
It's disgusting.
This is disgusting.
Fuck you.
YOU SIR, ARE AN IDIOT
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Thus was just...bad. A bad read altogether.
535115
I feel you man. That was terrible.
Learn to spell/grammar.
535066
Yeah, the pic's from the Ask Jappleack tumblr, which is actually a very fun blog and I recommend it.
But yeah, no to this story.
Wonderful!
I'm terrified by what the comments are suggesting... Not sure if I should read.
Oh, look! A fic with negative score! Well, the comments aren't that much better too! Let's read it then.
First chapter came and... you just killed Applebloom without ANY REASON AT ALL. Just dropped a bridge on her.
Nothing to add about the second. The third just makes the Applejack being more stupid.
The fourth explores better the Cutie Mark Crusaders without Applebloom, but it couldn't reach me, no kind of pity for her. Probably because of the way it's written.
Stupid Applejack in the fifth, nothing unusual.
No pity for her at the sixth too. I actually can't care about any of them in this story but then the body disappears. WHAT A TWIST?!
TL;DR: It was a completely out-of-character for basically everypony and I hope, I seriously HOPE, that you can wrap this story better than you started it.
That was bad...just bad
I'm not mad...just disappointed.
Judging by the title and the author's name, this is most likely a story similar to the anime of the same vein. Unfortunately, trying to do something like this means you'd really have to cross some lines, like breaking character (which is already shooting yourself in the foot as it is), which is absolutely the last thing you want to do. Sorry, but I can't see this really going anywhere.
Good job, you've pretty much botched an adaptation of one of my favorite animes. I hope you're happy.
i won't even touched a chapter because of everyone's bad opinion.
Uh...bodies only get covered in flies when they start to putrefy, which would take at least a few hours on a hot day. And this is in winter, when all the flies would be dormant.
Oh, and the writer's craft is a mess.
That's all.
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Okay. The story up to now has been subpar, in plot and writing and pacing, but that last part in this chapter? That's powerful, man. I see some great potential. Let's see how this progressesses.
Meinos Kaen
You know, killing of Applebloom apart... They were in character. The chest, though... I guess a reference to Higurashi? I have never seen it, so, I don't really know. We'll, all in all, this gets a 6.5 out of 10.
Meinos Kaen
this desrvs ftur bocks
Hu hrs
Lo.
He's destroying his murderous schemes by targeting our feels...
Jimmies are rustled, I am...
Oh..........OH GOD
