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806453 I can promise you that it does get better. I apologize, and promise to fix alot of my early errors ASAP. Act one was the hardest for me. I was jut getting into the swing of things. Now that my story is done, and I have added both an Epiloge and an alternate ending, I promise to fix the first few chapters. Again, so sorry...I'll make it better![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
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I've always enjoyed the characters with little or no background story about them or from their perspective, that is why I love stories like this one so much. This gives Trixie -who is one of my favorite ponies, just behind Luna- such filled character, which makes endings like the ones you have for this so deeply moving.
I'm not sure you need me to actually say what I think of this ending. Needless to say I like it just as much as the other one
806977 by all means, go ahead![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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In all honesty I'm not sure which ending is better. They are both amazing in their own rights. The real ending felt like it belonged and the alternate did as well. Either way it ended in an appropriate fashion. Still sad that this chapter was so depressing.![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
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Camlio said it all
808021 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope it leaves an impression, and other then thumbing this video up, I hope you tell others...if you think I deserve it![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
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808286 hehe, while I enjoyed writing both, I think Thr original ending, paired with the Epiloge, was the best ending. Both were good, but I perfered the happier one...![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
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So the story is now complete? Then I think you should change the incomplete to complete, if not then forget my comment.
Also, manly tears have been shed.
813786 almost...
843075 haha, if you can get through the first four chapters, it gets much better...I promise![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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854719 I understand...and admit that the beginning is the worst part...I'm sorry![:raritycry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritycry.png)
867655 ya know...laying with your back against something instead of lying on your belly like a normal pony![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
879261 ha ha, but think about it, both were cockie when the show started...and in the story, Trixie, much like Dash in the show, sobers up (as it were) and had character development. If you think about it...it works ;P
915372 I will reply as I always have...the ammount of problems with act one are unheard of. They are many, and horrible, but I fear a complete redo is in order...something I am not yet ready to do. If you can handle getting past act one (chapter 7) it really gets better.
1047508 oh dear...you're almost at the end...
Well I must say that loved the story and I loved the original epalogue so well done
1054726 did you perfer my original ending or the alternate? I liked the original because it held more emotion, but the alternate showed what life would have been like it it wasn't all an error. Either way...I'd say this story was a success...and if for no other reason, I hope y tell others to read this story so they feel the same way you do...I could care less about the likes and dislikes...I just want others to enjoy the story![:twilightsheepish:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsheepish.png)
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I like the original ending with the epilogue because RD got her original wings back and what not and they ended up together and that in my opinion is a happy ending. Yes the story was a success.![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
1065734 haha, that you so much. All I ask is for you to spread the word. I want everypony to read this story...and every comment like this makes me want to keep writing. I would recommend my other work, Octavia's Crescendo and Nightshy, they are also of great devotion ^^![:heart:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/heart.png)
I swear to god that if I was a stallion I want to bone Trixie and Rainbow Dash.![:eeyup:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/eeyup.png)
1077353 you finished? How did you like the ending?
1162165 who wouldn't?![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
1162285Shoot I'll ravage them, but I rather ravage Celestia.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
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1162739 you can assume that if I was in Equestria...you would know my ladies![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
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1339847 ?![:applejackunsure:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/applejackunsure.png)
okay...? Have a nice day then...
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