Nice one :)

As a connoisseur of all things anal, I've always enjoyed that awkward, experimental first experience... Sweetie gave it to herself pretty good here. I wholeheartedly approve.

So, by the Fleur tag, and the incomplete sticker, this will be continued? Interesting...

not eww, that was lewd

D--> Oh my, how... lewd
https://31.media.tumblr.com/46d936f7f48a49ffd169b2116f67db08/tumblr_n9hy6fnytK1rimze1o2_500.gif

Yep. That was a thing. A good thing at that.

Her race redder than Big Mac's coat color,

I think it should be face.

5446818

You can't prove that!

...but yes, thank you for catching that!

I couldn't help but be strangely fascinated by this. Good first time introduction into anal for Sweetie, and I like how varying physiology is used. I'd like to see more.

5441161 um....
I don't know how to respond to that.

I would say that if it hurts too much to use that dildo she should find a sex shop before the show tomorrow and get a purpose built butt plug. It would be more comfortable and she wouldn't have to worry about it going completely inside her.

Note: All characters aged up; the CMC are 18+ (seniors in high school).

Boo!

5449791 The story would not have been approved otherwise.

Anal adventures ahoy!

5449800 really? Have the rules changed? I know underage humans are illegal, but foalcon stories have plagued the feature box for as long as I can rememeber.

5450093 I do belive Thecamel got some shit from some butthurt admin.

5450093

Any stories with human or anthro characters must have any character involved in sexual acts be 18+.

5450121
Just remember the long-cherished rule of R34: "Hey, in my head, she's 18!"

ew what kind of monster would age up the cmc

now they've all turned into attention-seeking whore slut cunts like every other female in high school, what an abomination you have done

'I... better be safe than sorry.' Sweetie thought. Sweetie knew that she could easily grab the dildo with her fingers and pull it out, but pushing out the intruder in her ass without using her hands had felt... strangely satisfying.

tfw taking a shit is so good

5449800 Unfortunately. Stupid rules.

Wow, I almost feel bad for Sweetie, and she hasn't even gone into any training yet!

Can I get the full cover art?

5451082

Check my Tumblr.

Decent clop. Find an editor.

5451117 What is it? The Tumblr isn't linked on your account.
EDIT: Never mind I found it

5451184

Yeah, can't link anything NSFW on here anymore. But yeah, the Tumblr is relatively easy to find...

"but i poop from there"

5451184

Plague? The fuck are you doing here? Shouldn't you be giving us horrifying pony sex facts?

Also, holy shit, I can't believe how this story's taken off...

5451749

No kidding... just gotta make sure this doesn't turn into another Broken Hearts and Diamonds...

5451532 No... My lust for sexual creepiness can never be sated... You'll just have to do with creepy Achidna sex facts. Fact: The male Achidna's singular penis is topped by 4 heads.
I'm also too busy with my Clown-Mermaid hybrid and Clown-Reverse-Mermaid lesbian sex pictures for the foul-der.

She had believed that only sick, twisted sex addicts had to resort to shoving things up their anus,

Oh, well, RealityCheck would love this one, then.

but now she was beginning to second guess herself.

Wait, wait. No, he wouldn't.

5450805 True that.

5451117 Because of reasons I seem to be unable to find said tumbler, would anyone be so kind as to drop a bro the link? Please and thank you

5454011

Can't link anything NSFW on here. Look up 'AuthorTheCamel' on Google.

It's fine as is, BUT.... if you're going for realism... after the break you might want to put a line in about how Sweetie had done her evening toilette, washed, dried, and gone to bed. An accidental shove like that with a dildo usually gets very messy unless a person has taken steps to clean it out. Even then, santorum happens.

5451755 Diamonds was a great story. It sure made me hate Diamond Dogs and Rarity though.

5454690

Well, that was my goal for that story...

5454692 You succeeded.

5454696

5454686

Eh... realism sometimes ruins the fun of clop. Besides, we're talking about magical talking ponies...

5454807 Fair enough! Fair enough! I was just thinking when she accidentally shoved it... well... that could have been... easily... icky. I can speak from experience! "Sexy kinky fun times go! ....Eeeeeewwwww.... mood gone. Fun times over..."

5455066

Haha indeed, things can very quickly go wrong with anal play. For the sake of people's sanity I try not to get that realistic....

5455208 Fair enough. It was a nicely written story, despite that. She wasn't all 'oooh, anal! Kinky!' She was led into it. Works just fine for me. My question, of course, is does RARITY know this is how models keep their tails so high? If she doesn't, we must see her face when she learns of it! (and if she does, the look on her face when she sees SWEETIE's tail is high)

5455322

Ah, you bring up a VERY good point. Well, I'm sure she must know how the models keep their tails up as EVERYTHING must match for her outfits. However, we also know how caught up she can get in her designs and overlook things right in front of her...

5455388 I d hope we get a VERY awkward moment where Rarity notices a dildo/buttplug sticking out of Sweetie's ass.

5455388 I suspect that not ALL models do it, especially starting out, and that Rarity certainly thinks Sweetie Belle wouldn't do it on her first show.

Nice. One teensy problem though, please don't hate me.

PONIES HAVE NO FINGERS!

Other that that, no complains. Good grammar and spelling.

5456530

Anthro.

5456530 Just gonna do you a favor and point you to the Anthro tag up there in the description.