Fantastic story man. Keep up the good work!

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I get what you're saying. He just kinda has my type of numbed psyche that I got when doing live-fire exercises. Just taking a hit and moving on to the next thing. I can fix that if you wanted.

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Thanks!

You're a military pilot? Cool. Good luck out there and be safe.
As for the story, very interesting. Just don't move the relationship too fast. Even though, I can see it doing so depending on what had happened during David's arrival to Equestria.

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Not a pilot, I operate electronic warfare equipment in EA-18G and EA-6B Growler jets, I don't pilot them. Still cool to be at 30k feet and 5g's
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EA-18G
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EA-6B

Text cloud only issue I seen great story keep it up

PS any flights open to the public let me know always wanted to go up

you should add a human tag to your story.

so jealous

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Personally I think David's reaction of assimilating the job offer from Spitfire, without letting it impede his ability to do his job, fits perfectly.

really want to love this but its just so rushed i feel its like one of those joke fics or strictly clop ones. but seeing how it has a sequel i don't think that's the case... anyways i like it but i just cant seem to get into it