Dude living in Michigan. Been writing since middle school. I love games and playing piano. Married to a lovely artist.
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Really good little story. I like how masculine you made Caramel. You see many submissive takes on him, which is fine, but this take was a breath of fresh air. Got me though my morning wood nicely. Keep up the good work
This was pretty good. I hesitated a bit on reading this since I'm not into anthro, but I love me some CaraMac and this looked unique.
The only error I spotted off the bat was this:
Comma should be a period, as "smiled" isn't a dialogue tag. You could also use "Caramel said with a smile" to make it correct.
The closeness at the end nailed it a bit for me. I would like to think these two eventually consider themselves more than just "friends". Very good job for a first clopfic. Don't give the downvotes any mind... with M/M, especially M/M anthro, it's unfortunately not a reflection of this story's quality, but of some people's closed-mindedness.
Would it be okay if I promote this story in a future "Story Promotions" blogpost of mine?
5449160 Go ahead.
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Alrighty! Won't be for a while, since I typically only do one a month. Do you want a link when I do so?
5453628 I would like that, yes.
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Sorry it took me a bit. Here's the blog containing the promotion!
Saw this over on the promotion. I don't usually read anthro, but I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Great work!
5635111 Thank you so much for all the kind words. I owe you one!
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You're welcome! It was my pleasure, nothing owed.
Not gonna lie it was odd reading this one. With just relax he was about masturbating anywhere was kinda off putting I don't know why.
I'm digging the casualness. Is there any more in this AU?
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Nope. It was really just a one-off for a friend, and the AU isn't necessarily fleshed out enough to justify further exploration. Not that there won't be casual clop from me in the future.