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I'm guessing Hellar isn't dead?
Anyways, good job here.
5557075 Good job in what way? Not fishing for compliments, I'm just curious as to what you consider good?
5557086
the plot, writing, the grammar is good as far as I can tell.
etc.
5557089 Oh aight then, thanks mi amigo/a
Awesome chapters you are doing a amazing job
5557086 #AttentionWhore
5559637 ...Didn't I tell you that ima changeling?
So... why didn't he dodge her? Even if he wasn't expecting her, he's way faster than her.
While I'm fine with your characterization of Derpy, what i'm not fine with his Alex's reaction to her. Seriously, a lazy eye is not uncommon at all.
He could have just released a strain of the virus there, and everyone would be dead by morn. He wouldn't have to hang around, and if they were in town they would be sure to be dead.
How high is that wall? He can jump 10 stories in Prototype 1, and this is after Prototype 2, so he should be able to jump well more than that.
Goddamnit. You are talking about Pariah, aren't you. You use Pariah, and then throw him right into the villian role. Not just that, but you are suggesting that he's "perfect", and somehow stronger than Alex, despite being locked in a lab literally since birth, on the opposite side of the country than his mother, and generally had no way to improve himself..