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Red Flad, Retreat, to canterlot and Tell the princesses Now Twilight before it's too late. Bring the journal and just enough money to make it alone. Everypony has been compromised in the Crystal empire.
It could just be me.... but this chapter fills me with fear and a sense of impending doom that it probably shouldn't.
-which is good. I read for reasons.
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You can't write the cute out of Twilight. It's useless to even try.
Ummm.. what did Twilight see... Down there...
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When did Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy have horns?!
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Apparently two big places... now I'm just wondering why they'd be so big to cause her to freak out.
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Nopony else seemed to notice. Keep in mind Twilight may not, perhaps, be the most, um... "worldly" pony in this story so far, and she's your infallible narrator!
Mares missing horns?
Mind control?
If this turns into another Fall of Equestria story, I'm out.
5532257 Yep, I was thinking that too...
5366617 I agree. I'm seeing a decline of the... uh, what was it they called themselves? The four herd or something. I'm getting worried that ApplePieDash has been taken too.
Second Viewing.
Brace yourselves ladies and gents, because from this point forward that is the theme of things. In more ways than one.
Which includes her getting offended at catcalls, Twilight.
She is obviously not bothered by them; hell's bells, she is halfway preening from them.
Harassment: n. the act of systematic and/or continued unwanted and annoying actions of one party or a group
If she was doing nothing to discourage it is one thing, but she is actively encouraging it, get off your little high-horse (hehheh).
Nobody tasked you with getting offended on other people's behalf.
Stupid little SJW.
I notice that Cadance's first story and Shining's implicit story about how the horn got broken are contradictory, unless Shining and Cadance are having threesomes with waiters in food elevators. Of course, the point of the second version was to gross Twilight out and get her to stop asking more detailed questions.
Funny the things that stand out when you have the context.
Oh reeeeally?
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You know, they're lucky as all hell that Twilight is a naive nerd that doesn't know a cooch from a couch, otherwise their initial stupidity could have blown the lid on things sooner.
What? Did she shove it up his ass as part of some extremely lewd foreplay and he shifted wrong, or something?
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I think he was only implying sex was involved during the accident.
At least, at the moment that's all he's implying.
Just coming into this story now and still making through the early chapters I love the build and tension in this. Even with your first story you were a master at the whole inching horror and wrongness thing.
Twilight’s voice comes out splendidly in this too.
A crimson flag, perhaps?