Hmm.... And thus, Trixie committed suicide - brutally into molten metal. Twilight and Co. continue onto confront Mandeville. The main question is, why is Mandeville doing all of these atrocities? Fear? Conquest? Lack of trust? A perverted quest of knowledge? Spike's death will be avenged but, the underlying reason must be found in order to gain understanding.
him telling Twilight what Trixie did, even more so if he has her voice recorded.
Twilight would either never forgive herself for driving a pony to suicide or she would truly and irreversibly fall into the darkness by not caring
a win-win scenario
im such a horrible human being. oh well, i guess that the internet rule is correct. the more beautiful and pure a thing is, the more satisfying it is to corrupt it
That would indeed be pretty fucked-up, but truth be told, Mandeville isn't made of stone. While he IS going out of his way to cause misery, he has his reasons for what he's doing. He's no mad-dog, and he does feel some lingering regret concerning Trixie. He had no intention of letting Trixie leave, but he never dreamed that she'd actually choose death over facing the consequences of her actions.
yeah but im thinking that he didn't want trixie to actually commit suicide, right? and she did it because what twilight said, right? and if i was in his shoes then that would make me mad at twilight. and then i would show her the recording of it as revenge for driving trixie to suicide.
also, i mildly hate you. in every single fic where trixie gets shit i feel sad beyond imagination, dunno why but trixie is definitely my favorite she does not deserve what twilight said to her. she had been through hell after what the mane 6 did to her. she was just running her show and they just tried to put her down and now when her very freedom was taken from her i don't think it is anyones place to judge what she did. she could not know that spike would die as a consequence. she was promised that nopony would get hurt and she had no reason to believe otherwise.
hell, after i read this i had to create a x.5 chapter where trixie got to afterlife and meet spike and he forgave her just so i would stop feeling depressed.
but know this, the fact that you made me feel this strongly means that you are doing something right.
Haha, well I'm glad to know my writing is effective thus far.
You're right of course. However selfish Trixie's actions, while it IS essentially her fault, she couldn't have known. She never intended that anyone get hurt. I think I made THAT much clear. Twilight will find out about Trixie one way or another, mark me. Her feelings concerning her are nowhere near over.
Also, I'm not the sort of person that believes in afterlives. But where the story is concerned, I approach it like I approach the real world: it almost certainly doesn't exist, but I can't outright claim it doesn't either. I leave it to your own imaginations.
Heh, good to see this one updated. Definitely one of my favorite takes on the "humanity is an alien civilization" concept.
Hmm.... And thus, Trixie committed suicide - brutally into molten metal. Twilight and Co. continue onto confront Mandeville. The main question is, why is Mandeville doing all of these atrocities? Fear? Conquest? Lack of trust? A perverted quest of knowledge? Spike's death will be avenged but, the underlying reason must be found in order to gain understanding.
Great job J-Dude on such a powerful fic.
Holy shit, this story came back from the dead! Me Gusta!
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NEED. MOAR. NAOW.
Excellent story, anticipating moar.
you know what would be so fucking hilarious?
him telling Twilight what Trixie did, even more so if he has her voice recorded.
Twilight would either never forgive herself for driving a pony to suicide or she would truly and irreversibly fall into the darkness by not caring
a win-win scenario
im such a horrible human being. oh well, i guess that the internet rule is correct. the more beautiful and pure a thing is, the more satisfying it is to corrupt it
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That would indeed be pretty fucked-up, but truth be told, Mandeville isn't made of stone. While he IS going out of his way to cause misery, he has his reasons for what he's doing. He's no mad-dog, and he does feel some lingering regret concerning Trixie. He had no intention of letting Trixie leave, but he never dreamed that she'd actually choose death over facing the consequences of her actions.
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yeah but im thinking that he didn't want trixie to actually commit suicide, right?
and she did it because what twilight said, right?
and if i was in his shoes then that would make me mad at twilight.
and then i would show her the recording of it as revenge for driving trixie to suicide.
also, i mildly hate you. in every single fic where trixie gets shit i feel sad beyond imagination, dunno why but trixie is definitely my favorite she does not deserve what twilight said to her. she had been through hell after what the mane 6 did to her. she was just running her show and they just tried to put her down and now when her very freedom was taken from her i don't think it is anyones place to judge what she did. she could not know that spike would die as a consequence. she was promised that nopony would get hurt and she had no reason to believe otherwise.
hell, after i read this i had to create a x.5 chapter where trixie got to afterlife and meet spike and he forgave her just so i would stop feeling depressed.
but know this, the fact that you made me feel this strongly means that you are doing something right.
keep this up or trixie died in vain
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Haha, well I'm glad to know my writing is effective thus far.
You're right of course. However selfish Trixie's actions, while it IS essentially her fault, she couldn't have known. She never intended that anyone get hurt. I think I made THAT much clear. Twilight will find out about Trixie one way or another, mark me. Her feelings concerning her are nowhere near over.
Also, I'm not the sort of person that believes in afterlives. But where the story is concerned, I approach it like I approach the real world: it almost certainly doesn't exist, but I can't outright claim it doesn't either. I leave it to your own imaginations.
Holy shit you are the second person to make me want to murder the main human
I don't know what to say honestly.... But just Wow...