After two years of chaotic love, Princess Twilight Sparkle and Discord thinks their ready to tell the world about their secret relationship. With Shining Armor disapproving of this relationship, often trying to talk his sister out of the relationship with Discord, with his wife Princess Cadence telling him to give them an chance. When Shining Armor goes and confront his sister in front of the other Princesses, Twilight decides she had enough of her brother's over protective instincts. She and Discord decides to get marry, with the Twilight's friends being her bride maids and Spike being the best stallion or best dragon in this case.
Later that night, after the big wedding. Twilight and her lucky chaotic husband Discord have some bit of fun in there crystal castle. After their little fun, Twilight feels a bit of pain in her stomach, fearing of the worst. She takes a test to find out if she carrying the Lord Of Chaos' offspring, to her surprise, she is.
Does the Lord Of Chaos and the Princess of harmony has want it takes to raise a family? And how will there friends react when they hear the news, will they react badly or with disgust? Or just support the alicorn in raising one of the chaotic families known to Equestria.
And can these two newly weds, face the challenges that comes in store for them of starting a family on their own?
great beginning. I can already tell that this is going to be one of my favorites if you keep going like you are now. this is going to be awesome!!!!!!!!!
This is interesting, but I feel as if there should be something beforehand, maybe more. I kinda want to know how the story summed up so quickly in the title went now.
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I will be doing a story that's sums up this story, with some of the things that happen before they got married and their relationship, which maybe be in this story. Depending on how it goes. With that story will explain why I name this story's title the way it is.
Aw! I think it's cute so far. Add more chapters and I shall like and possibly fav. Keep up the good work!
This is a cute idea. I'm trying to give Twicord a chance, and I think your story may be the best option if I want a good opinion of it. Good luck. I can't wait for the next chapter.
My only complaint so far is that you just keep saying 'offspring'. Why not say 'baby' or 'child'?
more soon I hope I like this story keep it up
whats an elven month?
Nice job with this chapter. It was funny, though I hope Rainbow takes a shine to the little tike when he or she is born.
The cover art makes it seem like this is an anthro story. Is this true?
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No. It's not an anthro story. :3
I guess that's what happens when you find you have a crush on someone who is taken. you run away crying.
The well-known, alicorn herself was trotting over to the trio of magical beings. Princess Celestia bowed down to the couple with Twilight and Cadence bowing down to her as well, showing respect to the older alicorn. Celestia looked at Discord, waiting for the Draconequus to bow down in respect, he rolled his eyes, walking off from the mares to go and find the Princess Of The Night. Twilight dashed after her husband, Cadence giggled turning to Princess Celestia, who just stood there watching Discord's every move, her heart still racing and remembering their romantic relationship when they were just teenagers.
The well-known, alicorn herself was trotting over to the trio of magical beings. Princess Celestia bowed down to the couple with Twilight and Cadence bowing down to her as well, showing respect to the older alicorn. Celestia looked at Discord, waiting for the Draconequus to bow down in respect, he rolled his eyes, walking off from the mares to go and find the Princess Of The Night. Twilight dashed after her husband, Cadence giggled turning to Princess Celestia, who just stood there watching Discord's every move, her heart still racing and remembering their romantic relationship when they were just teenagers.
You repeated this sentence twice.
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Thanks for telling me. As I have fixed the error in the chapter.
They came. They Came!! YEAH!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for this chapter.
they sound so cute
5336322 Probably because technically when its two different species mixing..
5388170 They could say foal, since Discord is part pony. They could also say kid, or hatchling, due to his other parts. Offspring is simply the most simple way to put it.
when's the next chapter?
You might want to get an editor to look at this...
They leaved the castle, heading for Sugarcube Corner until a familiar hyper mare tackled Spike down to the ground, smiling. Pinkie Pie gave the dragon a pink invitation and to the lovebirds, bouncing off in a second to the Sugarcube Corner. Discord opened the invitation, with a shock look on his face.
Um.. It sounds like my five year old brother... So yeah get it to an editor... Good story though. I like it.
ok two things.
1: cant wate for the next chapter. love the story
2: the summery for this story confused me honestly i thought the story was going to take place to weeks before the wedding
right so I really love the story but I think you should properly look into getting and editor to proofread the story before you post
Hey, author, I'm the artist who drew the art you used for the cover of this story. I have nothing against it, but stil you should have been asked me (if you did, I'm sorry, but I just don't remember that). And also you should have been give me a mention for using my pic.
I'm sorry but I couldn't even finish the first chapter. The grammar in this fic is terrible! I hope English isn't your first language because that's the only thing that could explain how bad this fic is.
aw man they sound so cute
6772100 what the heack!?!?!? How rude can you be?!?!?! How would you feel if someone said that to you, huh!
I really love this story.
7072010 I was just telling the truth
7073950 you could have said it in a kinder way.
I'm sad this is dead. Other than the Pandoraverse theres no other fic where Twilight and Discord have kids
when is the next chapter?
Haha
Wait their were others named that!
I'm sorry, but you need an editor, this is an awesome story, but there are so many grammatical errors in this story that it makes it very difficult to read