I tend to be a bit willowy, and prone to hitting my opponents from afar.
So, Rainbow Dash walks into a bar, and attracts unwanted attention in the form of a creeper douche wheel.
But how does one shirk the un wanted approaches of a stallion that has two others for back up?
WARNING: Contains OC's and this was written in about two hours in boredom and based off a funny moment with friends while out having fun.
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Those are the types of guys right there.
The types of guys that I respect.
Willow, you've done good.
Assuming the first is right, the others may need a fix
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YESH
Thanks for that...
Helps quite a bit!
I don't know why anyone downvoted this, there's nothing inherently wrong with it.
I liked it okay, and I think Willow Wing is a good guy for what he does. It's a bit odd that RD doesn't lay the sleezeball out herself, though.
This story is okay. There isn't anything actually wrong with the story grammatically, and I didn't see any noticeable typos...
But.
Rainbow has charged at a fully grown dragon and kicked it in the face, and fought an army of changelings.
I doubt a creep at a bar would really frighten her, let alone really be a threat.
Also, she acted more like Rarity than Rainbow.
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