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Seven Fates
That girl that writes things you may or may not read. TG stuff, probably. Avatar of my batpony Evening Script by baladeAdvent.
Seven Fates
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Oh my, yes!
... Not gonna lie, I'm not glad that I read this. Your writing is solid, but that doesn't change the fact the content made me feel like a monster just for being curious about the content enough to read it.
Good on you for conveying that feeling, but now if you'll excuse me I need to go affirm that I am not a horrible person somehow.
5308041 Here's the thing you're not realizing. You've already reaffirmed that you are not a horrible person. The fact that the story made you uncomfortable—made you feel like you were a monster—means that you are inherently good. Reading about such a thing in detail can make you feel complicit in the act, and as a result feeling guilty about reading it is a perfectly reasonable response.
5308098 That was the conclusion I came to after doing some offline thinking, so I'm glad to hear that others think similarly. Thanks for that.
I can't finish this... I'm sorry, I love your stories, but I just can't do this one.
5309013 Fair enough. I can't say I didn't try to make clear that this was going to be something that not everybody would like, but I understand entirely why you couldn't. Thanks for being kind enough not to downvote.
5309043 Writing wise, it's a good story. If it makes people want to walk away, you've done a good job. I won't upvote this, but it doesn't deserve a downvote.
5309067 Exactly. Rape is a subject that should not make a person comfortable. Whenever I write on the topic, I try to ensure that the reader is not of the opinion 'that was hot'; I want them to take a look at themselves, ask themselves why they read it, and be upset or bothered by it.
sir I bow to you.!
you did the original story a vary good justice in this version , you should be proud of your work.
harts fire
5309219 Fact of the matter is that I wouldn't have posted it at all if Kaidan didn't like it.
yes I saw that in your notes, and I will say you are vary talented and I will be looking over you story archive as I have time.
5309250 You really should. Seven writes some really great stuff.
my big problem is I am 50 years old and my eyes are going bade on me so I need to be carful on how much I read.
I am pretty sure I have at lest one of seven fates story's on my tracking list now and I plan on going over his inter list as I can ..
Er, no, I really didn't take a green text thread and turn it into a story.
5311339 *hugs* I don't know if anyone tells you, but you are the awesomest.
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I don't visit 4chan and I don't think Seven does, he asked me to write this and started as soon as I posted DoH3.
Also, I got my own rape-greentext on 4chan?! That's awesome! It almost makes me want to figure out how to sign up for an account and contribute my own ideas to 4chan! Maybe I have a whole /mlp/Dawn Seeker or is it /r/Dawn Seeker or /b/Dawn Seeker?
I post meme's every time I comment, right?
Hell, I only learned to use reddit when someone made the account for me and filled it up with clop to lure me into learning how to use reddit. Turns out it was pretty easy, but it did leave me chaffed.
5323762 Well, technically speaking I started a few days after, when I'd caught up, but potato potato, right?
*Runs hand through hair* Normally I like darkfics but this just left me feeling disgusted. Good job, not many people can do that.
5323814 Then it's purpose was accomplished. It was simply disgusting seeing people asking for clop-chapters for DoH3.
5323859 In absence of reading it, would you like me to paste the author's notes from the story regarding why it was written?
5323853 I like the character so much that I really didn't want a clop chapter of something like that. You handled it beautifully though; you didn't go into to much detail as to make it painful to read and it showed somethings in the story that were left out.
5323884 Thank you. I'm glad you could bring yourself to face this terrible crime.
5323867 No, its fine. I'm sure some people were curious as to what exactly happened and transpired when Dawn was kidnapped. Besides I have a ton of other things to catch up on so I'm kinda focusing my views equally in other areas.
Hmm. I liked this better than the actual story. Probably better written, given what it had to work with. The actual scenario I'll still say is contrived, but this time around, you managed to back-seat the circumstances in favour of writing trauma.
Solid enough in that respect, and given that was (reading into the author's notes a bit) the whole point...
After reading this, I'll say that you managed to convey the tone of this (formerly missing) scene extremely well. I'll definitely be looking into reading your other work after this. Still, it sickens me that there are people in the world we live in who would do this to another person.
I don't like this side-story due to its nature or scenario - I like it due to its conveyance, the feeling that comes with it and its glorious writing style; I'm respectful of the fact that you understand and wish for the reader to be mindful of the true nature of rape. (I don't have anything against those kinds of cloppers, however.) This is a wonderfully grim and somber story; you pulled it off seamlessly. I feel kind of violated, actually... I'm too young for this kind of thing x'D
Christ but those things turned awful fast. Your first story in that setting is alright, it has a clear theme, a meaningful plot with conflict and resolution and all in all doesn't waste time. This, though? Pure refuse. The sequels were all pretty bad, but at this point you're just producing stuff that nobody needs to read for any reason ever.
5434501 Ahem, yes. So firstly, there's a little something that needs to be pointed out. I am not Kaidan, and the only way your comment makes anything resembling sense is if it was addressed to him. That out of the way, I don't particularly enjoy seeing other people being attacked for something I did, on this story no less. Now, I'm not going to fault you for thinking Dash of Humanity 2 and 3 are bad, as everybody is entitled to an opinion...
... but it's like you didn't even read the Authors Notes... or the description... or anything, really. I'd almost go to the point of saying that you probably just saw 'Dash of Humanity' in the title and leaped to the conclusion that "Oh look, Kaidan's made another piece of garbage; time to assume the shitting position," but then that would be rude of me.
5434501 Genius, absolutely genius. Also, no one NEEDS to read anything on this website so your whole comment it pointless and to the wrong person.
Even as someone who likes rape stories, I feel that I had more sympathy and care for the characters, instead of the normal rape fiction. It wasn't something that I enjoyed that much, surprisingly. I know I am messed up, (enjoys reading about merciless slaughter and rape, albeit not gore fics) but I am not a horrible person I think.
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as much as this scene is dark. I think I needed to read it. to fit in with the story. hoping dash of humanity 3 will continue soon as it still says incomplete, but this series of stories has always been one of my favourites. so thanks for adding this part even if you're not Kaidan
Now that I've a developed set of bookshelves, have yourself a Yay!