On the outside she is just like any normal mare, but inside, she is much more complicated. She lives a double life, fear constantly haunting her at her side. One day a stallion appears, but he is somehow different from the rest. Sketching Dawn must learn to control herself and learn to trust this stallion while hiding a terrible secret that may cost the two of them their lives.
This story Is a crossover with the TV show Doctor Who. It will help you understand the story better if you watch or have watched the show. If you have not yet seen the show, I will try to make this as understandable as possible.
Chapters (3)
You should probably put the chapter name "Dawn", where the chapter name is supposed to go. I honestly don't know what is going on in this story. Why are you not explaining to me how this "thing" originated? Why is it there? So, I will leave a dislike until further notice. Because you confused me.
5309157 The purpose is confusion. Over time, her story will reveal. Dawn doesn't even know what is going on herself, she is just as confused as everyone else is. There is much more to the story, and this is only the first chapter. Also "Dawn" is not the chapter name. I'm not planning on having any chapter names because if feel like they often times restrict what is in the particular chapter. "Dawn" is just the point of view, for different chapters, it will change.
5309384 Okay then..
5309451 Trust me, it will get better. I like to hide information in the beginning and then slowly reveal it as the story needs it.
5309471 Okay you get a like from me! Congrats!