5271110 Oh, what a magical story this would be if I didn't suck at writing clop. I'm working on the next chapter right now. It's going better than this one did.
5271528 awkward clop was planned to be awkward, at least. I'm not sure how well I did with the next scene, but it'll be up in just a few seconds. I didn't plan on this chapter, so it extends the story from three parts to four or five, but it needed its own place.
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5271110 Oh, what a magical story this would be if I didn't suck at writing clop. I'm working on the next chapter right now. It's going better than this one did.
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Don't feel dirty. That was pretty good. Bravo on your first clop scene!
5271528 awkward clop was planned to be awkward, at least. I'm not sure how well I did with the next scene, but it'll be up in just a few seconds.
I didn't plan on this chapter, so it extends the story from three parts to four or five, but it needed its own place.
Your first time is naturally going to be awkward and embarrassing, it's just how it is. I'm excited to read more.
5271200 If it makes you feel any better, I actually liked your style of clop more than many other clop scenes written by more experienced authors
He he my Niger