It's one thing to create/throw already-established characters in a story of some kind. It's another thing to develop those characters, regardless of the situation they're in.
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Ten years is a bit of a stretch.
I would recommend something more like three or five years.
5239639 It's plot-relevant, hold your horses. I only got started writing this.
This probably shouldn't be as funny as I found it.
5244981 Ditto. I don't know why I found it funny either.
5244986 Because we're horrible, evil people?
5245076 Most logical explanation.
So what's wrong with Koto, exactly?
5256414 First part of chapter two, she collapses due to adrenalin and oxygen abuse, and given the ludicrous amount of garments she wore at the time, also wound up overheating.
Yeah....not a good combo.
5256443 So, heat-stroke?
5258484 Something along the lines of that, yes.
...I'm not quite sure about what's happening.
5351340 Exactly. (Sorry, just woke up.)
At last we have some sense-making wordableness.
5358075 Yes indeed!
What happened to the two would-be fame-seekers?
They were funny.
5362093 The answer will come in time. Just wait.
...wut?
...Wow, they've stooped
5369122 Indeed.
...Hmm.
I just thought of something.
Are all the shippings still intact.
5372268 Yesh.
Bit of a Kingdom Hearts reference thrown in there?
About everyone forgetting.
5429557 Yes (which has also happened in Breath of Fire II, hence the song I slapped in the author's note.)
5430156 Yeah... Speaking of KH I just got me a leather Organisation XIII robe and wooden Oblivion.
5431367 Hot damn!
5431476 $85 for the coat and $45 for Oblivion.
Worth it!
I should have grabbed that Final Form Xemnas coat while the guy who was selling them was around though.
5431500 You sure scored.
Unsettling topics all around!!!
Also, happy new years.
5448508 Indeed, and to you too. :D (Oh, and I'm lengthening some of the chapters of the prequel by a few words, gonna do the same here so they're all in the 1k mark minimum.)
No-one disses the power of the 'Fro!
5462387 Indeed!
No offense, but the rape thing's just getting, well, old.
After this, it'll be over-used.
For this type of fic, that is.
5483618 I understand. I hope to avoid it in the near future.
Is this still alive?
7312944 Alas, afraid not. I just lost motivation for it, and moved on to other stories.
Though, in the future, I might revive it. After one hell of a re-working to both this and the prequel.
7313158 So you'll want to re-write the first on a second time?
7314237 Yeah. I'm already doing that with the redo of Arcane, with editors, so I may do the same here and on the prequel.
7314239 Let me know when you get started! XD
7314375 Will do.