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Ohoho~ This is gonna be interesting
...Am I.. seriously first? Well then, first time for everything o3o..
NOW TO READ!
oooo a Zecora fic I haven't read one of those in a while
oh and 973500 1.bp.blogspot.com/-_TkbcIBMy1Y/T2Ioh3r-T_I/AAAAAAAABGA/BAJcgUhFm7c/s1600/firstpost.jpg I believe this is what you are looking for
Great, another one of these... Well, at least it's got a romance tag, so there's that, and at least Zecora rhymes here. You'd be surprise how many people just don't bother with that.
You need more commas. It's kind of sounds weird reading long dialog without any pauses, and it's a bit jarring.
Zebra Lightning! Fu--... Buck Yeah!
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AW YEAH!
Well , it's good to see a positive turnout for this. The next chapter where all the action occurs is about 90% done but complications with internet have kind of been eating away at what little time I have to write.
First Zecora fic I ever read...
Interesting so far... want more ^^
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Don't worry! You should take your time 'n stuff
I can't wait until this story is updated, you're a very great writer
You have my attention.
The first Zecora clop in a long time, and its lesbian.
I guess I'll read it anyway.
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I do have a m/f/f fic if you are interested called "Soaring Hearts" if semi stright shipping/clop is what you desire.
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And I thought I had read all the Rainbow x Soarin Clops...
Needs a tad bit of touch up on the sentence structure and grammar, not to mention the spelling and capitalization (Rarity and Rarity's, not rarity and rarities. It's a name, not a description). Besides that though, I like it.
This is actually interesting.. It's not just another clopfic.. It has a plot.. yay..
sounds interesting lol. ill save it for a bit of a read later
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Of course it has a 'plot'... Yay! Conscious immaturity!!
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Thought the same thing but you beat me to the post XD
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Can I punch the colt who wants to take advantage of Fluttershy in the face? I need something to take my anger out on
Seems like an interesting development. Hope to see more!
Good so far. Ill probably look to see if it has updated when im bored later today. Good story, plot is good but could be better. all in all 7/10
ha i really like this, its good !
following this
a stache for you my friend!!
Why must you cliffhanger meeeeee!
When you described the halo cutie mark, it should be lower case. Halo is a game, a halo is different.
Damn! A fight scene in a clop-fic! Never would have expected that... And then there's those ghost colts... Makes you question who's really human, and who's a ghost... Or who's a pony and whatnot.
i like zecora for her rymes but i gues with what you sayed that she aint bounded to the rules any more, she aint needed to ryme again... but she still could. i wonder how this will escalate, if the tribe is coming its bound to be a asome show down between ponies and zebra huh?
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She will stil;l rhyme here and there, It's still part of who she is and yes, I do plan to cover/wrap up all plot (heh plot) points in the next few chapters.
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asome >.<
and lol on plot heheh your realy punny...
and i would love to see how fluttershy is, when she is all burning up... i pity the poor bronze hooves...
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I feel the same way. In my fan fic, (or at least in the Epilogue) I am Flutter's bodyguard. I'd pin Bronze Hoof to the ground with knives, by his feet.
Be careful Zecora! Not considering possible side effects, you should NOT use citrus fruits! The citric acid could negate or at least weaken the effect of the brew, I know this for a fact that citric acid can prevent the effects of Ibuprofen and Melatonin. Just be careful
Pretty interesting thus far. A fair amount of grammatical problems and, as mentioned by others, some commas certainly wouldn't hurt. Otherwise, nifty .
And the preaching killed my boner hard.
Goodness, can't people write a clop without getting preachy?
.....You did that whole thing just to not have to rhyme as much didn't you, you sneaky.
I loved this chapter it was awesome but I feel bad for Zecora I hope her and Fluttershy will be ok.I can't wait to see what happens next to them.
1360624 I can only enjoy a fic that involves sex when it's not all senseless porn. I love a fic that backs the sex with a story, especially when the story actually takes priority, and the sex just compliments it. To me, senseless clop is about as enjoyable as static channels on cable television.
Edit: Yes, I know. Old comment is old, but my statement still stands.
This chapter felt so forcefully contrived (quick google search to make sure that word means what I think it means...), but I don't even care. If anything, it made it more enjoyable, in a "it's-so-ridiculous-it's-funny" kind of way.
Zecora's tribe are cunts.
I wonder which chapter Chryssie appears in. *already having "Team Chryssie" banners and flags at the ready*
Cya
Raziel-chan
Suppose it's fitting that the land of zebrica closely matches the culture of certain countries.