Starswirl's Last Entry

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There have been many theories as to what happened to Starswirl but few know what happened that day. You do though. You found his last entry before his greatest experiment. Aren't you lucky. Just keep telling yourself that and maybe you'll sleep without waking up in the middle of the night with beads of sweat dripping onto your bed. Maybe.

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Grzyby

Grzyby #1 · Nov 3rd, 2014 · · ·

Some grammar errors and pytos so far but the text looks neat.

What is always constant? What is there, in every story, in every town, in every soul. We try to cover it up but it is there. It gives our lives a certain something that almost feels natural. If any other pony said this you might call them crazy but I have worked far too hard to be laughed off. If this doesn't work then I am sorry. At least I would have ended this life trying to succeed in perfection. I plan on using that one thing to transcend my current mortality into something greater. I'll be able to help generations upon generations of ponies until time stops. What is that constant thing? You should have guessed by now. Every species, great or small, is capable of the same thing on pretty much the same scale, if they wish. All anypony needs to do is simply will it and they can create it. It binds us all to each other, becoming the ultimate symbol of unity.

Yes, I know that feel, it is love.

Chaos.

WHAT!!!

Grzyby

Grzyby #2 · Nov 3rd, 2014 · · ·

Well then, Starswirl is Discord.

I can imagine the 'you' revealing the fact to Twilight (or finding it herself), and her disbelieving at first, but then finding no evidence against it. The revelation would make her feel lost and helpless, she could only become more accepting of the fact as time passes. And gain a whole new look on her draconequus friend.

Bro, this piece has so much potential for sequels or other stories built upon this premise. There must go like and fave.

And what the heck, have a follow, maybe you'll create something good later.

epicn00b

epicn00b #3 · Nov 3rd, 2014 · · ·

I imagine this would make a nice animated short. It's actually quite poetic for a short story

The Void

The Void #4 · Nov 4th, 2014 · · ·

5222951 What I twist. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I find the connection opens a lot of doors for what would happen if characters actually found out. In my head, the present version of him can now remember this.

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