"I'm heading out for a walk!" I yell out to my boyfriend as I open the door.
"Ok, Just be back soon." He replies, walking out into the foyer.
"Don't worry." I say, pushing my golden hair out of the way. "Ill be back before you know it." I smile, looking into his hazel eyes.
"I wont worry. You're a capable woman, Amanda." He says, walking twords me. He rubs to back of his hand on my jawline. I put my hand over his.
"Thats good." I say, leaning in for a kiss. He pecks me on the lips and smiles.
"I love you, Amanda." He says softly, running his fingers down the red streak in my hair.
"I love you too, Byron." I say, moving his hand out of my hair. "Im going now." I step out of the door, blowing a kiss at him. He blows one back at me. I shut the door and begin walking down my street. The neighborhood is generally quiet, just a few dog barks here and there, a nice forest lining the neighborhood. "Huh." I say to myself, putting my hands in the pockets of my purple fall jacket. "The forest looks... Shiner today." I whisper, glancing into the forest. All the leaves have a slight silver tint to them, the bark under then have faint highlights of a metallic silver. I see a glimmer from under a bush, 40 feet into the forest.
I pull out my phone and check the time. 3:34 pm It reads. I sigh and look back at my house, pursing my lips. "I wont be that long..." I mumbles, walking swiftly twords the forest. I pass the initial brush of the forest, now about 30 feet from the glimmer. I continue walking twords it but it dosent seem to get any closer, untill finally im only mere steps from it. I look back from where I came and I gasp in shock. I can no longer see the roads from outside the forest. It must have been more than 40 feet. I shrug, reaching into the bush to take the shiny object, only to see it is a very metallic silver rock. "Trick of the light." I say, shoving the rock into my pocket. I turn back around, realizing that I don't know where I came from. It all looks the same.
I look around, trying to find out where I came from. But its useless. All the trees look the same. the leaves are all the same silver-green. The bark all has the same metallic silver highlights.
I hear faint voices. "hello?" I call out, hoping for someone to find me. "Is anyone there?" I call out again. The voices get a little louder. But inaudible. A heavy weight suddenly drops on my eyes, making me feel exhausted. "It can't hurt to sit, right?" I whisper, clearing some leaves off the ground from the trunk of a tree. I sit down, putting my back onto the tree. "I can just rest for a moment, then I can find my way back much easier." I lean my head back more into the tree, relaxing. The weight on my eyes gets heavier and heavier until they snap shut.
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My eyes snap back open what feels like just a few moments later. "Wha-" I say aloud, Looking around. I'm no longer in the forest. I seem to be in some kind of a... hedge maze. I get up, feeling shorter than normal. Im an average height woman, but I feel much shorter. I feel like im on my hands and knees so I try standing upright, but I lose my balance and fall backwards. "Oof." I sit back up. "what the hell?" I look down to see... Cream colored horse hooves with no horse shoes? I try raising my hand up, but a hoof raises instead. "Holy shit!" I scream out. I raise both my 'hands' up infront of my face, but instead I get hooves. Again. Suddenly I hear the sound of hooves hitting the ground as they run. Several white stallions hop out from one of the paths into the area im in, I scream again.
"Are you alright, miss?" One of them asks. I scream louder.
"YOU CAN TALK!?" I yell out, backing up while still on the ground.
"uh. Yes, Miss. I can. Now are you alright?" The same stallion asks, eyebrows raised.
"NO IM NOT ALRIGHT IM TALKING TO A TALKING HORSE. WORSE I AMA HORSE!" I scream out.
"M'am. We are ponies." Another Stallion says.
"OHOHOH THATS EVEN BETTER. WAIT WHAT THE FUCK IS ON YOUR HEAD?" I scream, pointing at one of their heads.
"That is my horn, miss. I am a unicorn. As are you." He says, Looking at his fellow hors- ponies.
"WHAT!?" I yell, reaching for my head only to feel a pointy object coming out of it. "OH MY GOD WHAT HAPPENED TO ME IN THAT FOREST!?" I pull down my bottom eyelids. "WHERE AM I!?" I demand to one of the stallions.
"You are in Canterlot, Equestria, Miss. Please stop yelling." One says, cringing at the sound of me yelling.
"EQUESTRIA-" I begin but am very rudely inturupted by the same guard.
"Miss." He says.
"Where in the world is Equestria!?" I yell out, quieter.
"It is-" He begins but another white hor-pony comes out.
He whispers something into another stallions ear, gesturing to me.
"Come with us." The other stallion says.
"Why?" I ask, moving back.
"Princess Celestia would like to speak with you." He says, other ponies making way for a path out of the hedge maze.
Honestly, this isn't much of a start. So far, it's basically identical to hundreds of other "human becomes a pony" stories that have been posted here. You're going to have to find some way to make this stand out, or it will become just one more drop in the ocean of Human In Equestria fanfics.