Not really a fan anymore. But, I'll check in occasionally.
Discord is a Spirit of chaos and disharmony. Twilight is a princess of order and harmony. You might think, how could two entirely different beings ever be friends? In this story, Twilight realizes that anypony can become friends if they're willing to look past who they are on the outside.
( The OC is not mine. It belongs to my friend.)
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This was bloody brilliant! With only a few mistakes, the first mention of Discord's name is spelled with two 'o's and a few grammar mistakes I don't feel like finding. A short look-through will probably reveal them. I am curious as to why you typed Shining Armour the first time and then reverted to the alternate spelling. Whatever, I enjoyed this and I can't wait for the next chapter.
looks like the start of another prank war to me. with Discord and Celestia in on it, it could be epic.
Another well done chapter. Only a few mistakes which probably won't take away from reading for most people on here. Unfortuantely I hyperfocus on things and it did interrupt my reading. Anyway, just another fantastic chapter.
Another lovely chapter. I didn't notice any mistakes.
As a note, ponies use bits. Also, about what time in the programme does this tory take place?
I'll remember that. And to answer your question bastisawesome, this story would take place shortly after the events of Princess Twilight Sparkle. It's in an alternate universe, so this story won't completely line up with the MLP timeline.
Once again enjoyable, I do like Discrod's use of his powers for good and he should do more, what do you plan after the road trip series?
Spoilers
I must say, if I ever need somone's help with pony puns I can ask you. Anyway, I am saddened that the RT series has ended but surely you have something next that will make up for it.
A bit short and rushed. A guys day out should be more interesting and full of fun, all they did was eat and watch kids, and Spike, play on a water slide pf water. Let's be honest here, BESTIDEAEVER! But still a bit rushed.
5224059 I guess you're right. I'll add a bit more to it.
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What you do to indicate spoilers is this:
River Song
Of course, that only works with Whovians.
5226384 And you do that how?
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There is a button labeled SP. Click it and some spoiler tags appear. River Song's known phrase was 'spoilers'. It is a well made joke that I got from myself. I finally did something creative!
Interesting. I don't know if it is because my expectations are too high but it once again seemed short and not entirely serious. I don't know though, I do tend to mix up expectations for stories.
found one of the dreaded typo beasts
All I've got our scales [are] ?
5335931 Thanks. I will make adjustments. Let me know if you find any more.
Believe me I am no editor. I did find three spots. That one with two ? might be a difference of opinion.
I like how you are handling this story.
It last for three months [lasts]
But if you can't do ( ) , [it] ?
Twilight bemused. [ mused] ??
You updated Yay
I wonder what's gonna happen in part 2
Ponies don't have arms they have Forelegs
I'm one of the few who fangirls if Flash appears. I squealed a bit at
and
I love this
Enjoying the fic so far!
I do have one little issue with it though that has been bugging me nearly every chapter. I get that Discord is now one of the good guys, and I like that, but in this fic he seems... too good.
There is good responsible funny chaos... and there is neutered full on lobotomy of past chaos, now more fitting of the element of magic than Twilight Sparkle herself. (Ok, maybe that was a little over the top)
You can't really go back on that now with the story as it is without breaking this Discord's character, but it is something to consider in the future fics.
Regardless of my criticism, I'm looking forward to more!
... How is the Eifoal Tower a "Natural Wonder"?
5981840 I probably meant the "Seven Wonders of Equestria."
I can see how that would be confusing.