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Silent Guardian
Brony house artist as well as a gamer and a digital artist. Also it may seem that vinyl is my favorite pony but that is false. Twi is best pony especially now that shes an alicorn!
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You’re walking in the woods.
There’s no one around,
And your phone is dead.
Out of the corner of your eye you spot him,
Shia Labeouf.
He’s following you
About 30 feet back.
He gets down on all fours and breaks into a sprint.
He’s gaining on you.
Shia Labeouf.
You’re looking for your car,
But you’re all turned around.
He’s almost upon you now
And you can see there’s blood on his face!
My god, there’s blood everywhere!
Running for your life
(From Shia Labeouf.)
He’s brandishing a knife.
(It’s Shia Labeouf.)
Lurking in the shadows
Hollywood superstar Shia Labeouf.
Living in the woods,
(Shia Labeouf.)
Killing for sport,
(Shia Labeouf.)
Eating all the bodies
Actual, cannibal Shia Labeouf.
Now it’s dark and you seem to have lost him,
But you’re hopelessly lost yourself.
Stranded with a murderer,
You creep silently through the underbrush.
Ah-Ha! In the distance,
A small cottage with a light on.
Hope!
You move stealthily toward it,
But your leg! AH! It’s caught in a bear trap!
Gnawing of your leg,
(Quiet, quiet.)
Limping toward the cottage,
(Quiet, quiet.)
Now you’re on the doorstep,
Sitting inside, Shia Labeouf.
Sharpening an ax,
(Shia Labeouf.)
But he doesn’t hear you enter,
(Shia Labeouf.)
You’re sneaking up behind him.
Strangling superstar Shia Labeouf.
Fighting for your life with Shia Labeouf,
Wrestling a knife from Shia Labeouf,
Stab it in his kidney.
Safe at last from Shia Labeouf.
You limp into the dark woods,
Blood oozing from your stump leg.
But you have won.
You have beaten Shia Labeouf.
You know... All you have to do to be a better writer is two things:
Use commas for Gods' sake.
And when the people/ponies talk, use things like ?, ! or ., to end their speech.
These two things are All I ask of you, please listen to me...
5184051 I will try that in Ch.2
5186582 Thank you, it's nice to have authors that Listen to you.
Your the first that's done so in a month for me.
5186685 No problem I look for constructive criticism it is very helpful.
5183242 ...I'm disappointed that you didn't finish the song.
"no one would come to investigate he drug the body into the hedges" just letting you know it should be dragged it sounds better
You forgot to put the t in skull cut when Lyra says her name
5767677 Thank you for the advice it will be put into the edits
5768745 its OK im not the best writer but im happy to help