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Now that Twilight's old foal sitter is now her sister in law, she's been thinking of her more and more. Now Twilight is desperate to keep Cadence around for herself as long as possible. But how can Twilight keep someone as busy and important as a princess around in Ponyville? (Just a little something I threw together, nothing fancy.)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

First.
The pic is cute but i have never judged a book by its cover

This was quite cute. :pinkiehappy: Good job!

It was cute, but one thing catches me as odd:
What the hell was Twilight's gift?
Anyway, a fantastic story!

I personally don't blame Twilight, all she wanted was to spend time with her new sister-in-law

Okay formatting is a bit odd. considering the page break was simply a line break with no indication. yeah it's indented but usually leave a line between each paragraph for readabilty. also are you going for present tense? You use says, but other words are past tense.

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