Set 20 years after Discord was defeated by Twilight and her friends, Discord has escaped his prison once more. But this time, he's not just seeking to spread chaos, but also to exact revenge on the two ponies who ruined his plans before, Princess Celestia and Twilight Sparkle.
Seeing the signs of Discord's return Celestia sends the group on a quest to visit 6 magical bunkers built around Equestria. At each of these bunkers they are to send a letter to her. Revealing no more and simply telling them to "have faith" she sends them on their journey.
The group travels in search of the bunkers, each time sending a letter, and each time losing a member of their group to Discord. Not once did they receive a reply from Celestia, but even with friends lost they continued, always keeping their faith in the princess, believing that by the end of their travels their losses will have meant something.
This is my first attempt at writing so any constructive criticisms and advice are greatly appreciated.
Cover image by moderatelydeviant on deviantart, used with permission.
This is really good. I'm looking forward for future chapters
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Thanks very much for that, the fact that someone thinks that way about my first piece of writing makes me really happy. Sadly the next chapter is going to take just a bit longer than I thought, I know the basic story for it but classes are interfering. (Stupid college, stupid midterms).
I would say a rough estimate for me is to finish writing it late this weekend to early next week. Then it'll take probably a day for me to proofread and edit of it before I upload.
Daaammnnn that was good dude! really liked it, though there were some small grammatical mistakes it was still awesome, i really like how you just kinda threw us in there too 8/10
This is really awesome. Cant' wait for the next chapter!!!