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Goddamn! its buttload of mistakes, the description has mistakes the story has mistakes i aint reading this
5183116 then help me remove them instead of whining,
for this purpose exist comments. 
As someone has told me I tried to repair some mistakes in description. And if someone has any doubts I want to anounce that Chapter 1 is still unedided version.
It's of course not an obstacle to make second chapter with will be soon ready to read for anyone who will want. 
Ps. of course first look will be for my editor.
Wow I had an idea using this same basic premise, freaky.
Don't know if it'll ever take off though, I have a lot of ideas and not all of them get done.
5196162 Then just try it. I for sure wont try to stop you. The only thing that matters to me is that when some story is made it should be made to the end.
5196194 Oh I agree with you. the problem is that it isn't a fully formed idea, and I suspect that mine comes from a different Diablo game, specifically Diablo three reaper of Souls. also mine is a Demon Hunter, but beyond that and some other differences the basic idea remains unchanged.
Realy guys if you dont like something then write about it to me to let me know what's wrong. Dont just leave me with nothing.
How can I improve myself if I dont know what I do incorrectly? I'm just a beginer writer from diferent country. 
For everyone who's still interested in reading this story. My editor had done first chapter so it's now an edited version.
So if you still have any trouble with this particural chapter write it and I will answer. 
The grammar, WHY!?!?!
What is your first language? because I hope it's not english!
*Edit:
Ok there's one question answered. But what country are you from? Because if the grammar looks great in your eyes you speak a Romance language, but which one? Great story, love the idea but please, get an English editor I'm sure if you asked around some sites you could get one.
5266571 Simple Poland. Small country in the middle of Europe where native Language is Polish that is a form of Slavic language.
Ps. my editor is currently working over chapter 2 + my other editor has finished editing chapter 3 + 4.
Unfortunately chap 4 is one of the worst that I ever wrote in any language but if anyone survive it later it will be better.
Why a changling? Couldn't you have just let him be a druid with cat eyes or something? Or just let him be unaffected?
5269725 not really it would make my plan for story really hard to realise if not imposible. besides I'm not into Zoofilia.
And do you really thing that if some human that have power to destroy whole Equestria if he want would be granted freedom? I doubt so. So I have made him unable to use much of his strenght and magic to let him slowly adjust to new situation.
I like the concept and I don't really care about grammar so I will keep on reading , but you should get a profreader since some parts are hard to read. Anyways I hope you will have a good day and that you keeps writing at your own page.
5288673 I have proof-reader and all chaps exept 2 are already edited, so to make any changes I need specifics about what's wrong.
Besides that, thanks for a comment it's nice when someone don't judge you too much. 
Nice
I must say that whoever was this kind person that give me this 23rd like is someone that bring me hope that my work can be actually appreciated, so for this... Thank you.
nice story
now i'm interested in the gala
5552896 exactly that's the point!
But for now I have trouble to finish the chapter that I am working on curently, no matter how hard I think I can't find it any interesting and I have enought of dislike's without any comment.