Nightmares are gripping Ponyville's denizens. It's up to Private and Twilight to find a way to free them of this dark power. But something evil is lurking behind the scenes, something very old, and very angry.
Sequel to The Celestia Code. When the monsters created by the dark crystal engine escape their prison, it's up to Princess Twilight to deal with them. She gets help and advice from Princess Luna, but things don't go as planned.
An attack on Ponyville means that the Cutie Mark Crusaders must reveal a deep, dark secret. And, face off against a threat that would harm all Equestria.
Very nicely done so far! Definitely need to see more of this one. It could use some more attention; consider adding it to appropriate groups. There are several Luna and Twilight groups that it would fit, including TwiLuna (if that's the ship).
5113233 Sorry, I'm quite new to all of this. I actually took a break from writing because it didn't get any feedback, so I thought no one really cared. But I guess I'll continue when I can.
Very nicely done so far! Definitely need to see more of this one. It could use some more attention; consider adding it to appropriate groups. There are several Luna and Twilight groups that it would fit, including TwiLuna (if that's the ship).
Also, credit the cover art: http://steelforcer.deviantart.com/art/Twilight-Sparkle-Star-Shower-374682813
5113233 Sorry, I'm quite new to all of this. I actually took a break from writing because it didn't get any feedback, so I thought no one really cared. But I guess I'll continue when I can.