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A Destiny Crossover.

Warlock Aron Williams and the Speaker had realized the dire situation the last city on Earth was in. The forces of the darkness were growing stronger and through efforts of the Guardians the Traveler was equally regaining its strength. A constant balance. One side not over coming the other. With interstellar travel resulting in failure for help the Speaker believes help may be found in an alternate universe. If only returning home was as easy as getting there.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 45 )

while i do see potential for this fic, the whole thing so far just seems to simple.

Yes, YES, and fervor more FUCKING YES THIS IS GOING AWESOME!!!

In the words of Homer Simpson: "WOO HOO!":pinkiehappy:

5074994 I am afraid I have to agree with BronyPonyMan- I get that the City needs a new method to fight back against the Darkness, but is there a reason to dimension hop other than to ask for help? The Speaker and Aron's plan doesn't seem very well thought out; the Warlock in question could have ended up face to face with some eldritch abomination instead of something friendly with logic like that.

Ehhh i dunno. the problem for me with Destiny that story is lack luster at best,cut into small pieces of unrecognizeable mush with only way to decipher them is to search for cut contect itself on reddits..But i guess i will watch for updates and see what you will do with this mess. Good luck

5078268 I couldn't agree with you more. But it has such potential which is why I thought it might make a good story.

this can only end in horror.

Needs some work, it also feels a bit rushed.

Aron Williams

r's look like n's sometimes. I was about to metaphorically lose my shit.

I was wondering when someone would make a crossover with destiny, you have caught my eye...:moustache:

5080175 Ha! Anon Williams. I can only imagine.

Not bad so far. I'm looking forward to more chapters.

>reads story
>dinklebot has too much emotion in this story
>still looking forward to more chapters
>have a mustache :moustache:
>immediately started reading the first part in the speaker's voice

5141980 I honestly wish that dinklebot had more emotion in the game. But that's fanfiction is for! :rainbowdetermined2:

5142200 this is true, dinklebot could have been better with some non-dlc skins, emotion, and better characterization than "a shard of the traveler... That can talk... And scan stuff..."

.....................:ajbemused:


CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The sun is a traveler.

5150795
That better not be the case. We have enough party poopers on this site we don't need you too.
...But it is intuitive.

5156957 or the moon.

I'm game to edit if you need me too.

5167804 Really? Ok, how do you usually go about editing? My last editor did it from the unpublished chapter link.

5145712
Check out the E3 Gameplay Reveal. Dinklebot was soooooooooooo much better during development.

5183818 A lot seemed to have changed. I actually heard they scraped the first story they had in mind for the game.
http://gamerant.com/destiny-original-story-details-traveler-speaker-twist/

Its sad when you think about it. The original story was probably much longer and indepth, then one day they decide, 'eh lets try again'. I wrote this fic because I felt cheated on the story and I felt that with what they give from the game that a thousand better stories could be told and while I have much to improve on as a writer I guess I did it just to prove to myself it could be done.

5170625 Typically through Gdocs, but I can use the unpublished chapter method as well.

dude, this is really rushed. You need to slow down...show some personality quirks.... or something like that. Im begging you, this has to much potential going for it.

Celestia let him off that easily? I wish everyone was so easy to persuade. Maybe Aron just has speech level grinded out to 100 or something.

5431817
I know what you mean, my friend.

Im waiting for the next chapter.
Great job so far I like where it is going! :pinkiehappy:

C'mon, I want to read more :flutterrage:

Oh my god I can't wait for twilight to meet...DINKLEBOT GHOST!!!!!!

Guardian meets wolfs

Guardian says to ghost: music?

Ghost says: sure

80's rock starts then

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5157159 Maybe they're both shit-tier Travelers and can only support one guardian at a time...Celestia and Luna?
or they're their ghosts?

7052573 whelp, I wonder who luna and celly's guardians are. or have they already said, "Guardian Down"

7055026 or they themselves are guardians and the sun and moon are shit-tier Travelers?
You know, like I just fucking said?
^Maximum sass, please don't read^

7055184 please, if you think you can insult me through sass, you are sorely mistaken. I have a little sister who is part of almot all of my fandoms.

7057582 Just covering my bases, there just seem to be so many special snowflakes all over the internet these days.

7057817 I melt those special snowflakes with flamethrowers of harsh reality and criticism.

Are you not going to continue this story? It's quite well done if I do say so myself.

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