This isn't Ponyville... An odd happenstance has left Diamond Tiara on a world that she doesn't know, with people far different than the ponies she knows, and no real hope of ever going back. She's going to have to learn to survive, a
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Well, at the very least Fredrick's suffering is inspiring DT to become a better pony. First comment!
I hope that guy doesn't cause trouble in the future...
You switch to first person here at the end.
This bit makes no sense.
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I hope that I cleared up some of the confusion with what I meant in that one area.
LF
How do you drap something? Did you mean "drape?" Otherwise, this chapter was good. The pacing was a little quicker than I would like, but it works.
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It was a fast paced chapter, but the next one is a little slower. Actually the next one deals with something horrific happening in the Stacks. Diamond gets to see something about the darker parts of human nature when all hope has been lost.
5111401 OH NOES!
It appears that Diamond and Frederick are around the same area of Pinkie and Andy. I hope they meet soon. I have a feeling, sooner or later, Diamond's luck is going to run out and those bastards are going to get their hands on her.