• Member Since 5th Aug, 2014
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XxTwilightSparkleXx


I love reading fanfics, clopfics too and I love writing them also. Stay tuned!

Comments ( 19 )

was decent, maybe some more detail, also forgot to add human and anthro tags

So..... Is this anthro? Human? Either way its missing a tag, last time i cheakrd ponys dont have hooves or eat meat.

4993086 i just commented on that and somehow diddint see you there. Oh well, the more "pls add tags" comments the better.

Oh, and add human and anthro tags by the way.

Oh, and the cover arts missleading.

to short, or rather it seems rushed


50% bishop approved



stay classy :moustache:


:facehoof: I don't mean to be rude, but you are to wild in your writing. You need to work hard on pacing, not having so many unnecessary distractions (AJ and Twilight), and focus on what you said the story was about.

Not bad....but it could be better. Still, not bad.

4996270 i think it was great no problems

4995154 Everyone thought the last story was too rushed, so that's kinda why I made it a bit longer til the actual clop.

oh, I can't wait for tonight :pinkiecrazy:

You need to put the anthro and human tag in there, for ponies don't have hands

Okay! Just to put some things straight, I added the human tag, so please no more comments about that! :D

what just happen? why he suddenly need to go his place?

5148955 why he need to go back to his home?

Applejack broke her leg time to call farmer brown.

5148955 So is Pinkie an anthro or is she a 'feral' pony? Because in one paragraph it talks about her wearing a bra, and in another, it talks about her hooves digging into his back. So yeah, like I said, confusing.

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