A human, born with super powers, outlives his home and leaves Earth. Finding a new home is easier said than done. Especially after being captured and placed in a box for thousands of years by cute little paranoid ponies.
This story is great even with short chapters and is a lot smoother, detailed and story-oriented than the previous story! Also I like the yellow you used which was easier to read without highlighting! Keep up the good work!
Love it!
This story is great even with short chapters and is a lot smoother, detailed and story-oriented than the previous story! Also I like the yellow you used which was easier to read without highlighting! Keep up the good work!
Ehm...
I think you mean: "A man born with powers, outlives the Earth and must find a new home."
Alternatively it also works with:
"A man born with powers and outliving the Earth, must find a new home."
5004183 Thank you for your input. It will be corrected.
This could be interesting.