Good god, what made it more horrifying was that i was listening to this while I was reading it.

this should be in Post-Fall

this is clearly an anti/post fall piece.

it need be moved.

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Please, continue with this! It's great, but you quite made a fail right there by putting this on the regular Fall of Equestria group.

Your disease kinda reminds me of the gory horror comic Crossed, where the human race gets attacked by a disease where everyone turns into a genocidal, nymphomanic killer, hellbent to kill anyone near you. They are marked with a singular red blistered cross over their faces.

4979459

Ding ding ding! You found my main inspiration!

You get an internet cookie for that!

I got it from a mare with reddish eyes... but I'm sure it's fine! lol

I never did submit this to the FoE group, but my guess is some people just saw the Fall of Equestria tag and just assumed it was another sad story of a mare getting broken.

But, I will continue to write, and I look forward to expanding this as much as I can :)

4979459 Would you call me a lier if I told you that there is a MLP story that has the Crossed disease in Equestria on the same tumblr?

4979695 I admire your determination

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Same here; HUZZAH...!

Interesting. Seems to me that the Cairbou really should have invested in STD prevention.

Although, in all honesty, I would like to see what causes this disease, if it even is one. Rather disturbed and karmic, if you ask me.