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Grammar Nazi signing in, this chapter hurts to read
I think you have a good idea but you need to proof read your work.
521634shut up nonbody likes a grammer nazi ok so shot up
936305 u said it
dude, nice!
no alicorn OC, no alicorn OC, no wammie, no wammie STOP!!!.....
actually do whatever you want but I can still dream!!
liking it so far keep it up
A few errors.. but OK!! Let's the adventure begins!!!!
Reading the title of this chapter, did the house at least land on Chrysalis?
Wizard of oz reference is cheesy but funny at the same time
Yes there are spelling and grammar problems, but frankly, who gives a shit. Nice introductory chapters
A good and interesting read so far keep it up!!!
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or maybe discord
2876209 Please be DT and SS...
my guess is that the thing is a human
Dumb AJ, Of course there're houses outside her farm. There's a whole village of them.
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I'm just going to assume you're meaning a rogue (stray, wayward, renegade) branch...
Im guessing the guy gets turned into an alicorn or somethin
So far, the writing seems unpolished, but not unbearable. The core concepts are intriguing but the dialogue feels hokey in places.
Se ve interesante y la escritura no es tan mala