Wonderful story as always! Enjoyed every minute of it.

Especially when I was prereading.

First!

First off, great story, as is you norm.

Secondly: Curse you >>472492472492...

Awesome.

It took me longer than it should have to figure out the sun drops were fire.

Very nice.

Congrats on getting onto EqD Autumn.

Not bad! It's a strange tale, but an interesting one!

>>473840473840

Dis. Dis right here.

I like. I like a lot.

Wow, that was pretty good. Glad I gave this story a chance. You have some serious talent

This deserves more attention than it has received, in my view.

This was truly beautiful. It was perfectly written and really helped add to the feeling. I definitely want to hear more from you. Perhaps other stories from ponies history of other discoveries? *hopeful* I'd love to see you tackle other time periods too.

Alondro trots up to Sun Brandisher as he's straining to light a fire with his magic.

"Dude, I got this," says Alondro as he pulls out a lighter.  And so, the first jackass was discovered.  

Amazing! I absolutely love this! It is my new headcanon.

Although this story is probably as reliable as our stories about cavemen hunting mammoths during the iceage it is nevertheless an engaging tale. Especially the complete lack of direct speech, nicely done!

A nice story! First, it is a bright story, the kind that makes the reader warm and happy (kind of like the protagonist's fire). Second, its description of the pre-paleolithic ponies (Frazetta ponies? The Herd of the Cave Manticore?) rings true; though simple, it paints a believable and intriguing picture. And now I have used up my long word quota for today...

I really love his perception of fire. Well done !

>>16240561624056

Thank you! Glad to hear that you've enjoyed it. I tried to capture the sense of the wonderful unknown, and I like to think it worked out.

Beautiful story, friend! You earned a follow, favorite, and a like!

>>16890581689058

Happy to hear that. ^^

>>491575491575

Image: http://cdn.derpiboo.ru/thumbs/1300/600/2012/11/14/00_25_31_53_151310__UNOPT__pinkie_pie_batman_shocked_g4_to_g3

>>19894951989495

Image: http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/234/9/3/i__m_a_filly_and_what_is_this_by_lootascoo-d47j5mp.png

I have no idea what you're even trying to say with that picture.

>>19900841990084 I have no idea

It just sort of happens

I do remember this fic though!

I gotta say that was one of the best short stories I have ever read. It was short and simple yet perfectly conveyed the the fact that the actions of a single person(or pony in this case) can change the entire world and shape history. I applaud you for this wonderful little story. So worth a fave and a follow I can't wait to read your other works. I should thank Sketchy Sounds for directing me to your profile

This was really cool. You do have a knack for histories, methinks. :) The idea of, essentially, caveponies (though of course ponies wouldn't have lived in caves), not having cutie marks or colorful coats or language, is great. That last part I think you especially handled well. A good story, well told. :)

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Thanks.