A ruthless high-ranked soldier in the Changeling Empire, Bruno, wakes up from a coma, to find only that his race has mostly been wiped out. He wants the head(s) of whoever is responsible, his small investigation leads to the Elements of Harmony, which leads him off to PonyVille; where a coy, caring pegasus, and a daring and influential young pegasus, shake up his unattended plans.
Notice: The cover art for this story is temporary; intended cover is a work in progress.
I think this is a great story, I can't wait to read more. It's just paced a little too fast but not to were it would really ruin your story. Keep it up, I want to see more chapters soon!
~wubster2015
As a heads up, you might want to take a look at your short description. To be brutally honest, it is horribly worded.
Bad story.
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5563215 Alright I will.
5563280 Thanks for your opinion.
5563306 Thanks.
5562712 Alright.
5564078 Well I don't have a proofreader, are you offering?
5564155 Eh. Thank you for the advice though.
Its been almost half a year, when will you be able to continue you this?
6112790 Oh my god man, I'm so sorry, I've just been losing my passion as an author and so forth-