• Member Since 11th Jul, 2013
  • offline last seen Aug 29th, 2023

Secondhand Brony


Just some author that lives in Chicago with a simple dream to become one of the most elite authors on this site, but for now, I must work my way up.

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A ruthless high-ranked soldier in the Changeling Empire, Bruno, wakes up from a coma, to find only that his race has mostly been wiped out. He wants the head(s) of whoever is responsible, his small investigation leads to the Elements of Harmony, which leads him off to PonyVille; where a coy, caring pegasus, and a daring and influential young pegasus, shake up his unattended plans.

Notice: The cover art for this story is temporary; intended cover is a work in progress.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 14 )

I think this is a great story, I can't wait to read more. It's just paced a little too fast but not to were it would really ruin your story. Keep it up, I want to see more chapters soon!
~wubster2015

As a heads up, you might want to take a look at your short description. To be brutally honest, it is horribly worded.

5563280 Thanks for your opinion.

5564078 Well I don't have a proofreader, are you offering?

5564155 Eh. Thank you for the advice though.

Its been almost half a year, when will you be able to continue you this?

6112790 Oh my god man, I'm so sorry, I've just been losing my passion as an author and so forth-

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