• Published 1st Sep 2014
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The Dawn of Zane - LoganvllachANDGodmod3



Icy Wind is a special unicorn from Canterlot who is mentored by Princess Luna, one day a train crash happens when Icy is waiting for a study partner to arrive, and that's when everything goes out of order.

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Zane

They answered the door, and there the zebra stood, Glistening and Suzie just stared Glistening said "Can we..help you?" he raised a brow.
Jacob had a blank stare "...Zane." his stare turned to an angered smile as he tackled Zane. Zane spoke softly, dodging as he poofed away every

attempt. "Awww, what happened to your wing?" spoke Zane "None of your buisness!" snarled Jacob "Hmhmhm..You really are pitiful.." He jabbed into

Jacob's torso, as Jacob screamed "Don't you know? I enjoy this..and your just a figment of my imagination!" Zane replied sarcastically "Oh your just

a figment of my imaginati-You talk to much!" he jabbed it in further as Jacob laughed maniacally. Suzie frightened screamed "Stop!" and tackled Zane,
"Why you.." Zane prepared to take Suzie's life as Glistening intervened with a long staff like tool, and swung at Zane with all his might, Zane went

flying back and disappeared into a pool of boiling acid...

Jacob sighed "He's not gone..He'll just come back to torment me again.." Suzie was in tears, Glistening went to comfort her, and put Suzie in bed.

Glistening angered said "What was that? Whats going on?" "That's Zane..My alter ego.." Replied Jacob in a very serious manner...

Later that day..
Suzie and Jacob played video games..well..more so Jacob, Suzie was busy stalking his every move, Jacob got a headshot "Kiss the dust! Eyeheheh!"
Suzie replied with "Okay!" "What?" said Jacob puzzled, "Nothing!" blushed Suzie. Glistening was making bacon and hay, as that was literally all they

had "You lovebirds having fun?" snarked a sarcastic Glistening Spark. "MUFFINS!" Was heard from outside as a loud pound was heard.
Derpy Hooves, a pegasus pony, the mailmare, had Icy Wind mounted atop her along with his guards flying along side the mare, she loved muffins.
Derpy had a bit of a crash landing. They found derpy on the other side of the hill that would lead to Ponyville, but they had some cave trauma, so

they werent doing that again, so Derpy offered to give Icy a ride over the mountain, as the guards were carrying equipment and couldnt do so

themselves. Princess Cadence and Prince Shining Armor of the Crystal Empire had heard about the train crash and were in town to see the situation.
They were being interviewed, when all of the sudden I saw a pony sitting atop the Ponyville docks..watching me...he was a hooded pony, a stallion

from what I could make out. I attempted to tell the guards about it, when all of the sudden the guards pointed out Jacob, that he was my partner.
But wait boys! ya can't just leave me! cmon! were a team, don't throw me with this guy!" I whined "Sure we can! we just did! our job was to get you

to Ponyville, and we did!" They replied chuckling, and flew off to canterlot. I grumbled and went up to Jacob, as he bucked me with his back hooves.
"Hey! what was that for?" I said angrily, he replied with "Oh, I just thought you needed a little help..thats all." "Hows that helpful!?" I asked,

"Trust me." he replied. I grumbled as he made no sence, I followed him to Glistening's House, where along the way we were stopped by a rainbow maned

pony on a cloud, "Rainbow Da-" I stopped her "Not Interested." we continued walking and we arrived at Glistenings house, where my parents were.
"Mom? Dad? Why are you he-" I was stopped by Jacob "It's not really them, Zane, I'm tired of this!" They poofed away as Zane locked the doors and

appeared infront of me, he appeared to be charging an attack, and just as he finished it, COLTon came in and bit off Zane's ear, Zane disappeared.

COLTon walked up to me "Mas...ter...Master Icy Wind..." as he broke the locks "Well, looks like we found the unicorn who I built the robot for!"

chuckled Glistening Spark. "And you are?" I asked "Glistening Spark, Professional Tinkerer at your service! Can't ya see? My cutie mark is a wrench

and screws!" Glistening proudly said, Suzie sarcastically corrected him "Yeah, your about as professional as a..a..Eh I got nothing." Glistening

Chuckled "Out of insults already Suzie? it was just getting fun! Heheh!" Suzie Grumbled.

"..This..was odd..Well, speaking of my parents, that reminds me!" I ran outside and asked a purple pony for directions "You! Purple Unicorn! Do you

happen to have directions to the nearest post office?" I asked "I'm Twilight, and it's right over there!" She pointed pleasantly westward.