Two human heroes from completely different Ponyverses, are now shoved into yet another one together. Will they overcome whatever is plaguing this new Equestria, or are their personalities and characteristics too much for each other to bear...
5132725 I like the part where the princesses explained how the room that held the Elements of Harmony was also a training ground in the past. It really adds the historical feeling to the story.
5132771 Cool! I was trying to figure out how to make that room more than just what it was. But do you think I should have let Pinkie hug James and get growled at by Fenix, instead of Flutters?
5132864 Now that I think about, yeah that would have been better than letting Fluttershy get yelled at. Pinkie wouldn't be the least bit fazed, but she would have probably hugged James to death. Either way, it was still pretty good.
Nice chapter, bro. Hope to see more in the future.
5129622 Thanks. Though which part did you like or should've ended differently?
5132725 I like the part where the princesses explained how the room that held the Elements of Harmony was also a training ground in the past. It really adds the historical feeling to the story.
5132771 Cool! I was trying to figure out how to make that room more than just what it was. But do you think I should have let Pinkie hug James and get growled at by Fenix, instead of Flutters?
5132864 Now that I think about, yeah that would have been better than letting Fluttershy get yelled at. Pinkie wouldn't be the least bit fazed, but she would have probably hugged James to death. Either way, it was still pretty good.
5132897 Possibly, maybe... Though she's gonna have a harder time trying to make Fenix laugh or smile. Trust me, it's tough making him happy.