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Apple Bloom brings a blunt paring knife to school to share an apple with her friends. Nothing could possibly go wrong.

"It's the evil Nightmare Paring Knife! Run!"

Oops?



Some elements of Twilight Time are ignored in this story. This story is post-S4.

Written in response to a prompt. Edited by various friends.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 18 )

Obligatory "That escalated quickly."
Also, reserving first comment to put off all those "FIRST" people out there, and also as a placeholder for if I want to say anything else. :twilightsheepish:

-Spirit

The concept is good but it is too long. I think if it were split into chapters it would be easier to read.

Wow, Discord was incredibly interesting in this one:moustache: Still, great story :twilightsmile:

5185698 Blast, I knew it. And here as was thinking one-shot actually meant one chapter.:twilightblush: I'm glad you liked it!

5185817 I'm glad you liked my rendition of Discord,:raritystarry: I have a lot of practise with characters like him.:trollestia:

-Spirit

Zis is Wünderbar! We need a sequel I think.

[5]: Somewhere else, Rarity slammed a hoof into a wall. The subsequent wail of despair was heard through Ponyville. “My hooficure!”

Oh sweet Luna, I can't breath!

5185845 a one-shot is a single chapter but it is too long to fit into one chapter, at least, in my opinion.

5185849 Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I set it up in a way that'll allow for sequels if people want it.:raritywink:

5185853 I was laughing too when I wrote that.:rainbowlaugh: Rarity never gets old.:duck:

5185858 Haha, LuminoZero's oneshots are upwards of 19.000 words long.:pinkiehappy:

5185897 if there were a way to save place in a story it would be better.

5185897 if there were a way to save place in a story it would be better.

5185915 There's a bookmark function in the dropdown black bar.:twilightsmile:

5185923
Does that save the exact position?

5185978 which doctor is that?

5186503 it is supposed to be the first Doctor.

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