• Member Since 14th Aug, 2014
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Autumn Glen


I am Autumn Glen. I'm into writing Romantic Fics. My best friend is Do You Like Ponies. I'm like, related to Tirek, or something.

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When Tirek visits Autumn in her dreams and informs her he has a more powerful version of himself, she freaks out. And who better to tell than her best friend Cookie? That's the only pony who believes her anyway.. Well that is before Tirek took everpony's magic and used it against them. Now it's up to the two earth ponies to save their own butts.. And maybe the world, too!

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Comments ( 6 )

Your cover art is...unfortunate. It might be better to just go without.

Right away, I can tell that you would benefit from catching a few small errors. Try writing with spellcheck and then pasting the text into the site page.

"Brain Flame." Huh. Well, I guess it had to be something. This isn't a criticism, I just think it's interesting how you named it.

"Autumn," A distant voice called
"I would watch what you do, little filly," The hooded creature snapped
"That's right," The centaur monkey cackled
"Ahhh!" She screeched

The first word after speech doesn't need to be capitalized.

It's not bad for a first story. I'll give it a favorite and see where it goes.

4852609 Thanks for the corrections. I'll fix it. I used spell check, and didn't see anything. Could you maybe show me what was misspelled, other than the pony's names?

Hey I saw your previous cover art, and I was wondering if you'd like me to make you a new one? I'm not a super duper amazing artist or anything, but I could try and you can see if you like it.

4852776 Sure. PM it to me when you're finished, and I'll see if I like it.

4852831

Alright. But can you PM me a pic of the two OCs you want in it?

4852878 Sure. I'll make them on Pony Creator.

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