Luna has long lived in Celestia's shadow, unnoticed by those ponies who should rightfully love and adore her. But there is one who has noticed her. The shadows. They watch, and notice both, and come forth to give praise as is deserved.
Howdy. I've been writing fanfiction for years, but I thought I'd just join on here so you all could read the few stories I've done for MLP. Nothing fancy, but I had fun writing them.
Luna has long lived in Celestia's shadow, unnoticed by those ponies who should rightfully love and adore her. But there is one who has noticed her. The shadows. They watch, and notice both, and come forth to give praise as is deserved.
This was an amazing read. You truly have a gift! This story is easily in my favourites. You wrote their conversation incredibly well, and every emotion that Luna had. You have my attention.
Good work
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That was pretty good. Keep up the great work!