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Oh my god, Donnie Darko!
First, let me say that I'm a big Donnie Darko fan, and I'm excited by the prospect of someone writing a pony version.
Second, I did notice a couple of grammar and stylistic mistakes, as well as a few typos. I suggest you look through EQD's Omnibus, and maybe go to Ponychan/fic/ and ask for the help of a reviewer. Those people are excellent in explaining what you can improve.
Third, this is just personal opinion, but I would probably not reveal the content of The Philosophy of Time Travel this early. Half the fun of the movie was trying to make sense of what was happening amidst all the mystery.
With that said, good luck writing your story and have my like!
I just saw Donnie Darko Thursday and EH MAH GERD!! If this is nearly as good as Donnie Darko, its gonna be great
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Good to see someone noticed. I was going to put it in crossovers and acknowledge in the details that it was a Donnie Darko crossover, but I thought it would be better as an original story; for the people that haven't seen it. Thanks!
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Open your mind, Donnie Darko didn't make much sense either.
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